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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Apr 24, 2009 8:39 am

then best solution to control siva's power would be to seal the beast in a manner similar to the nine tailed fox
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Apr 24, 2009 10:25 am

I finally got to reading Pandemonium, and I must say it's a wonderful chapter. Really loved it.

And I agree with the others. You are indeed proffessional level writer/artist.
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Apr 24, 2009 2:11 pm

zelda31 wrote:
then best solution to control siva's power would be to seal the beast in a manner similar to the nine tailed fox

That's a good hint, I've already thought about that... but during berserk state the potential of beast grows gradually and to high levels (unlike nine-tailed fox, which potential is fix, though high.)
Paragon Siva's berserk state to a bottle, with its water (potential) level augmenting from the inside exponentially. When it reaches the top, the water is free to flow out (I mention the magic energy radiations shown in PANDEMONIUM). If we put a seal, and block water, the internal pressure shall reach critical levels for the bottle resistance, and in a few seconds, ---crash--- the "water" finds its way out anyway, damaging, or breaking the recipient.
To make the paragon, Siva would explode, pieces of flesh and internal organs flying all around, and a geyser of powerful magic energy would substitute Ascarlin mountains.

There can be only other two ways to free her...
Her death (though, after Siva passes out, beast entity would make anything to preserve the body, even remodeling her very flesh and transforming it in his "true form")
And total eradication of beast, whatever it means.

Pendragon wrote:
I finally got to reading Pandemonium, and I must say it's a wonderful chapter. Really loved it.

And I agree with the others. You are indeed proffessional level writer/artist.

Thank you, and... Just artist, please Wink

Writer rights go to Zoekin, I just "direct" his work with my messy outlines lol!
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Apr 26, 2009 6:35 am

when the seal of the nine tailed fox was made it used the demons own power to seal it and allows the host to tap into this power but only under certain circumstances it seems your study on the seal was not thorough enough which would allow this type of seal to work
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Apr 26, 2009 6:38 am

also I have some unique ideas for future chapters
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Apr 26, 2009 9:08 am

zelda31 wrote:
also I have some unique ideas for future chapters

I'd be pleased to hear some of them ^^ pm me whenever you want.

Still, now it's going to start the "Siva Project", it consists in the "enlargement" of the stories including many other Felaryan places and some active featuring characters through the chapter advancement.
This means, I've planned all the story until 9th - 10th chapter by now. (plus some special chapters) geek

I'll tell you the 3 characters I've chosen to feature by now (already asked the permission and stuff, I'm not a lame chara stealer XD )

- Arcanthos aka Grave (by Graveripper)
- Alex and his crew (by Pendragon)
- Rin (by Karbo, but still have to ask him, oh, well, I'm doing it now)

In the future there may be some others Very Happy

Tell me everything anyways, I'm still in time to make some changes ^^ Cool
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Apr 26, 2009 5:07 pm

lord of the rings where siva somehow gets the one ring
tales of symphonia where cassandra ends up going after descovering a great power
and dead rising siva, queztel and arzah fall into a dimensenal rift that goes into the town of willamette and end up fighting lots of zombies
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeMon Apr 27, 2009 5:59 am

zelda31 wrote:
lord of the rings where siva somehow gets the one ring
tales of symphonia where cassandra ends up going after descovering a great power
and dead rising siva, queztel and arzah fall into a dimensenal rift that goes into the town of willamette and end up fighting lots of zombies

Surely good ideas for spin-off stories XD
I'll keep them in mind for when the primary part of the project will be done, then I'll try to write something about it ( the zombie one is a damn must Very Happy )
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 12:27 pm

I've wrote the "Azrah & Annie" Siva Stories special chapter.

It's kinda useless, cut a little, but still fun.
Enjoy ^^ here it is http://zombynx.deviantart.com/art/Azrah-Annie-121444938
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeMon May 11, 2009 5:06 pm

Tremendous changes for Siva Stories, and many revelations in the next chapter!

Expecially for Azrah.
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I've sent the outline to Zoekin, in the meanwhile, I'll write down a special chapter about the comeback of a particular character...
Hated by many.
Loved for her looks.
The worst bitch of Kinassiah.

----Cassandra----
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeMon May 11, 2009 6:24 pm

Can't wait to read it lol!
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeTue May 26, 2009 6:44 am

I finally got a grip(...That came out wrong) and red ALL siva stories(...i think) and i must say...AWESOMENESS XD

...what else could i say^^'
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Reptillian wrote:
I finally got a grip(...That came out wrong) and red ALL siva stories(...i think) and i must say...AWESOMENESS XD

...what else could i say^^'

XD Thank you... I put so much effort and imagination in the story plot, glad to know you like it Very Happy

Someone expressed some doubts about Azrah transformation, what do you think about that?
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 03, 2009 1:25 pm

the chapther he transforms in has been aired???
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 10, 2009 5:58 pm

I was kinda hope for azrah and siva get freak on when azrah so siva could have kids but that possibility is all but gone now
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Jun 14, 2009 11:12 am

question does like my suggestion for the spin-off stories
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeThu Jun 25, 2009 11:26 am

zelda31 wrote:
I was kinda hope for azrah and siva get freak on when azrah so siva could have kids but that possibility is all but gone now

Not totally, I can imagine many ways to make that possible again ^^

I have not gone that far yet with the stories, who knows, maybe it would make a good epilogue

zelda31 wrote:
question does like my suggestion for the spin-off stories

I liked them.


Oh, yeah... for those who didn't read it yet, the new chapter is out, the best ever for my humble opinion ^^

MAELSTROM!
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Ahhhh so here's the topic featuring my favorite naga.

What a beauty she is.

Who would want to get rid of beast? Then the lovely lady would lose the best part of her.....
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PostSubject: Re: !!! Siva stories !!!   !!! Siva stories !!! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Nov 22, 2009 6:07 am

new official chapter has been aired!!!

TIDES OF FATE part 01 -----> http://zoekin.deviantart.com/art/Tides-of-Fate-reposted-144354044

the perfect soundtrack to hear while reading it is here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ft_ENqdPTBA


Impressions about the guests appearance? (Alex, Grave, Rin, cpt. Falcon)

About how the story suddenly turned out?

About the death of Azarah and Siva?

About the awesome gore parts added on repost?

Oh, let's talk about Ewoks too...
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Plenty of awesome, lots of action, enough inconsistencies to keep you guessing... What else is there to ask for?
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