Kaimana and the Singing Nekos

Hey,

I have written a story with the above title. Not my first, but my first set in Felarya. It features a mermaid, some nekos (plus a few other snacks) and is about six-thousand words long. I'd appreciate a sub-editing style pass over it, if someone would care to volunteer?

Yours,

Ambrose

I can do it, just pm or email me a copy

Hey,

I have sent it to you by PM.

Thanks!

Ambrose