My felarya stories

Hehe I want to use the moment to annotate that I've a few stories which plays in Felarya. You can find them all at my profil on DA

http://ravana3k.deviantart.com/

under Gallery and "Felarya stories - Vore/Non Vore

There are still neraby 70 stories about Felarya which I've written and I'm looking all the time for somebody who give me criticism to them


Greetings, Ravana

Cuz usually I'll be hammering at your english grammar indeed

A persons proper usage grammar does not devalue the quality of what they are trying to write. I like proper grammar and an easily readible story as well as the next person, but i enjoy his writing even if the usages are not perfect.

Thus have i said it and thus shall it be. Bwhahahaha!!!!

Well I do my best with the grammar but I'm not a foreign language speaker and so I have sometimes little problems with the grammar. But I think I've made well during the time

Ravana3k wrote:

Well I do my best with the grammar but I'm not a foreign language speaker and so I have sometimes little problems with the grammar. But I think I've made well during the time

True. You have gotten better at it O:


@ trh: I'm an english language college student, so I can't really help it ^^;

I did not mean to sound like a jerk, I am just a little partial to his stories, so I can be a little abrasive personality wise.

(Hits self on head and looks ashamed)

Hi Ravana3k!

Nice to see you here!

I'm a really big fan of your work as you know and your grammer doesn't bother me at all! It can't be easy writing in a second language.

They really are great stories! I love how well you describe vore! I always find that a little difficult!

Zoekin wrote:

Hi Ravana3k!

Nice to see you here!

I'm a really big fan of your work as you know and your grammer doesn't bother me at all! It can't be easy writing in a second language.

They really are great stories! I love how well you describe vore! I always find that a little difficult!

Thank you for the kind words

Oh my god that's right.. already 70 stories ^^;

And I agree, you have made incredible improvement in your english over such a short time

70 stories!!! Wow, i have read alot of them now, but i did not realize there were that many.

That is indeed most impressive for a person whose second language is english.

Keep up the writing

trh7323 wrote:

A persons proper usage grammar does not devalue the quality of what they are trying to write. I like proper grammar and an easily readible story as well as the next person, but i enjoy his writing even if the usages are not perfect.

This much is true, however, readability and the ability to convey a story in a manner in which can keep an audience's interest are two different things.

For me, what keeps me interested is two things; grammar and detail. The grammar isn't the biggest of the two but it is important because it controls the flow of the story. If you don't have good grammar then the story can end up sounding very sequential and end up flopping like a fish on dry land.

Detail is by far the most important because you can't have too much or too little. I always say, "you can never have too much detail," but in truth you can have so much that it will make people loose interest. I myself try to include enough detail about the environment and character descriptions/actions as possible so that people can see what my characters look like in their mind's eye.This is key and I do believe you've followed these guidelines to a point Ravana3k.

Forgive my absence in reading and reviewing your stories as of late... I've been busy studying. I'll do m best to fill you in on grammar and detailed areas as best as I can. However, that'll have to wait until I get some studying and finals out of the way.

Well. no problem and thank to your words, of course I'll work on my grammar and I hope also I'm detailed enough so that my stories are enjoyable.

Thanks also to karbo and trh for their kind words


Oh and I'm planning to crack the 100 Felarya stories ^^

Ravana3k wrote:

Oh and I'm planning to crack the 100 Felarya stories ^^

Good luck

Hi Ravana3k! (damn, everyone, and I mean, everyone came here this is GREAT!)

I must assume... that I didn't read many of your stories, -shame on me-

but from what I've managed to see, your grammar is quite correct, and you have a nice writing style

With that many stories you definitely need to do at least one trade / co-written story.

Rythmear wrote:

With that many stories you definitely need to do at least one trade / co-written story.

What do you mean? Sorry didn't understand exactly what you're meaning, maybe its too late ^^


and @nsk: Shaaaame on you

No, serious, its no problem, maybe you read some of them in future, but thankfs for the compliment

Ravana3k wrote:

Rythmear wrote:

With that many stories you definitely need to do at least one trade / co-written story.

What do you mean? Sorry didn't understand exactly what you're meaning, maybe its too late ^^


and @nsk: Shaaaame on you

No, serious, its no problem, maybe you read some of them in future, but thankfs for the compliment

co-writing: writing a story with someone else O:

R.J wrote:

Ravana3k wrote:

Rythmear wrote:

With that many stories you definitely need to do at least one trade / co-written story.

What do you mean? Sorry didn't understand exactly what you're meaning, maybe its too late ^^


and @nsk: Shaaaame on you

No, serious, its no problem, maybe you read some of them in future, but thankfs for the compliment

co-writing: writing a story with someone else O:

Oh ok I understood right ... well this is in work I think. I've asked already a writer which I see as very geniously if he wants to write together with me a few days ago, only the type of writing isn't very clear in this moment

Ravana3k wrote:

R.J wrote:

Ravana3k wrote:

Rythmear wrote:

With that many stories you definitely need to do at least one trade / co-written story.

What do you mean? Sorry didn't understand exactly what you're meaning, maybe its too late ^^


and @nsk: Shaaaame on you

No, serious, its no problem, maybe you read some of them in future, but thankfs for the compliment

co-writing: writing a story with someone else O:

Oh ok I understood right ... well this is in work I think. I've asked already a writer which I see as very geniously if he wants to write together with me a few days ago, only the type of writing isn't very clear in this moment

How'd you like to do a trade?

Rythmear wrote:

Ravana3k wrote:

R.J wrote:

Ravana3k wrote:

Rythmear wrote:

With that many stories you definitely need to do at least one trade / co-written story.

What do you mean? Sorry didn't understand exactly what you're meaning, maybe its too late ^^


and @nsk: Shaaaame on you

No, serious, its no problem, maybe you read some of them in future, but thankfs for the compliment

co-writing: writing a story with someone else O:

Oh ok I understood right ... well this is in work I think. I've asked already a writer which I see as very geniously if he wants to write together with me a few days ago, only the type of writing isn't very clear in this moment

How'd you like to do a trade?

Well I've never done a trade before but I think if the right trade will be offered; everytime

Then let us do a trade - PM me and I shall discuss it with you

Rythmear wrote:

Then let us do a trade - PM me and I shall discuss it with you

Allright

Message sent - commence debating *Puts on my bartering hat*

Wow. Ravana3k + Rithmear. what could come out from this? I must not miss it XD

nksrocks wrote:

Wow. Ravana3k + Rithmear. what could come out from this? I must not miss it XD

A cute little fluffy doggy .... or something even more horrible


Well we don't know exactly, we'll still think about it