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PostSubject: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 4:08 am

I wasn't sure what part of the forum to put this in... Just a bit of silliness that crossed my mind and amused me while I was listening to Jurassic Park music.

I began imagining a sort of "Felarya Park", where predators captured in their infancy would be exhibited once they were grown up. They would roam large spaces surrounded by high electric fencing, while visitors would pass by and gape at them. Until something inevitably went wrong, the predators got loose, and many tasty visitors ended up being devoured. lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 5:53 am

Get enough people together and you could probably make an RP out of that.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 6:00 am

I can think of so many ways that could go wrong. Most of them ending with full pred bellies. The people in JP couldn't keep stupid dinosaurs in check, and these are intelligent, cunning predators we're talking about. Whoever tried it must be incredibly stupid or greedy.

Needless to say, I'd love to see the preds escape and get some payback.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 6:06 am

Hmmmm....This sounds like it would make one heck of a story! I honestly think it would be a pretty idiotic idea to cage up creatures like that though. I like it^^
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 6:08 am

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I can think of so many ways that could go wrong. Most of them ending with full pred bellies. The people in JP couldn't keep stupid dinosaurs in check, and these are intelligent, cunning predators we're talking about. Whoever tried it must be incredibly stupid or greedy.

They only failed because some fat computer genius sabotaged the park so he could escape and sell baby dinos. The people responsible only hired the wrong person.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 6:17 am

Still, the park didn't have any failsafes in place in case the power was lost. Sabotage aside, the first thunderstorm or hurricane to hit the island could have the same effect. They were unprepared for the unexpected.

And with intellegent predators, there's a lot more that could go wrong. They could win over or intimidate some of the park personnel into helping them. They could capture someone and hold them hostage. They could try to communicate for outside help. They could even build a battering ram or something like that.

Of course, that makes the assumption that the preds want to escape. If they know no other life, and are contented with their situation, then they might decide against causing trouble. That's a very fragile situation though.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 6:30 am

The preds would have known no other life. But, as you said, they're intelligent; they would be aware they're confined, and might not like it. There would be ways for them to get out of an enclosed space, and wreak havoc.

I wasn't really thinking of an RP. If some of you want to RP this, though, feel free. Smile I won't take part, but I may write a story based on this one day.

Or (an idea that's just popped into my mind), it could be a serialised story. With different people writing different chapters. If I were to start it off with chapter one, would anyone want to write chapter two?

It may be a fairly silly idea, and of course a blatant rip-off from Jurassic Park, but I feel it could be amusing. lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 6:33 am

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Still, the park didn't have any failsafes in place in case the power was lost. Sabotage aside, the first thunderstorm or hurricane to hit the island could have the same effect. They were unprepared for the unexpected.

Not a guarantee, sabotage is pointless if backups remove your work. Anyone smart would disable them, too (the last thing you want is for backups to come online and you get caught red-handed, stealing unborn dino's). Since we never saw any other problems, we can't say for sure if they were prepared or not.

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Of course, that makes the assumption that the preds want to escape. If they know no other life, and are contented with their situation, then they might decide against causing trouble. That's a very fragile situation though.

Felaryans seem to be effected by how they are raised, just like a Human. I'd say it is very likely any raised there would be happy lazing around being fed.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 8:33 am

People & the Government (for real world, at least) would really not stand for it (unless it's populated by stuff like Kensha Beasts) for three reasons:
1) The 'animals' in there are intelligent. Besides size, it really is no different than making a Zoo of D&D Player Racers should the possibility arise.
2) It's too dangerous to try - this line of thought will especially be held if they learn some Predators can cast magic. An electric fence won't stop Predators who are hungry, you'd need stuff like "Walls of Force" just to keep them penned in.
3) Hasn't it been confirmed that at least one Predator species off Felarya would be in quite the pickle due to their body's structure not holding up when outside Felarya's influence?

Meanwhile, for Felarya the issue is even more obvious: No major city would (or even could, due to the Crystals or Defenses or the liking) let the Predator convey near them.

Not to say you can't make a RP for worlds where this can happen. Or put it in an isolated part of Felarya (however it'd still be a pickle to explain how they managed to capture so many baby preds without getting killed, but then failed miserably in the "what do we do with them?" department). To sum it up: Great idea for RP and all when asking questions is unnecessary, as well as plot-lines that are for humor, but not so great if you can't find a way to explain it so people's questions are answered.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 8:50 am

I think with enough technology you could have a habitat that Felaryan predators could live in on Earth. In Jurassic Park the whole amber DNA thing was pretty sketchy for real science, but hey, that's the movies. It would be interesting if the breakout is started when somehow one pred learns about Felarya and they all decide they want to go home.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 9:38 am

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People & the Government (for real world, at least) would really not stand for it (unless it's populated by stuff like Kensha Beasts) for three reasons:
1) The 'animals' in there are intelligent. Besides size, it really is no different than making a Zoo of D&D Player Racers should the possibility arise.

I'm not thinking of putting it on Earth.

On other worlds, the idea might be perfectly acceptable.

Remember, we had human zoos on Earth until about 100 years ago. In Britain, France, Germany, the United States, Belgium and elsewhere, human beings from "primitive" societies were exhibited in zoos as exotic specimens until the early 20th century. Given that Felaryans are "half-animal" in appearance, it's a certainty that, in some places, "Felarya Park" would raise little or no moral controversy.

Particularly if the preds were captured as infants and never taught to speak. They may be intelligent but virtually mute, having picked up just a few words from their captors.

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2) It's too dangerous to try - this line of thought will especially be held if they learn some Predators can cast magic. An electric fence won't stop Predators who are hungry, you'd need stuff like "Walls of Force" just to keep them penned in.

The danger didn't prevent Jurassic Park. Wink And the preds wouldn't know how to cast magic. Nobody would ever have taught them how. (Unless it's instinctive.) Besides, doesn't their magic generally derive from the Felaryan land?

The preds would also be kept well-fed, to prevent them from getting hungry. And they would be fed animals; they'd be brought up not to see humans as food.

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3) Hasn't it been confirmed that at least one Predator species off Felarya would be in quite the pickle due to their body's structure not holding up when outside Felarya's influence?

I've never heard anything about that.

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Meanwhile, for Felarya the issue is even more obvious: No major city would (or even could, due to the Crystals or Defenses or the liking) let the Predator convey near them.

I wasn't thinking of putting it in Felarya.

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It would be interesting if the breakout is started when somehow one pred learns about Felarya and they all decide they want to go home.

*nods* Maybe they could learn about it from a sympathetic keeper.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 9:41 am

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*nods* Maybe they could learn about it from a sympathetic keeper.

Sympathetic idiot, more like.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 10:04 am

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3) Hasn't it been confirmed that at least one Predator species off Felarya would be in quite the pickle due to their body's structure not holding up when outside Felarya's influence?

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I've never heard anything about that.

I think he's referring to Felaryan fairies, which I'm pretty sure Karbo's stated that they are a species of fairy that can only possibly survive in Felarya.

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Or (an idea that's just popped into my mind), it could be a serialised story. With different people writing different chapters. If I were to start it off with chapter one, would anyone want to write chapter two?

I'd be up for that.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 10:17 am

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3) Hasn't it been confirmed that at least one Predator species off Felarya would be in quite the pickle due to their body's structure not holding up when outside Felarya's influence?

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I've never heard anything about that.

I think he's referring to Felaryan fairies, which I'm pretty sure Karbo's stated that they are a species of fairy that can only possibly survive in Felarya.

Keeping a Felarya fairy alive in a Zoo shouldn't be a problem if it's set up on a magical world.

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Beautiful and cute winged humanoids that can only live on worlds filled with magic, like Felarya
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 10:29 am

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I think he's referring to Felaryan fairies, which I'm pretty sure Karbo's stated that they are a species of fairy that can only possibly survive in Felarya.

Ah, I see. Thanks.

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Keeping a Felarya fairy alive in a Zoo shouldn't be a problem if it's set up on a magical world.

But a magical world would enable them to use magic. Which would make them dangerous. Wink I think we'll leave fairies out of Felarya Park.

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Or (an idea that's just popped into my mind), it could be a serialised story. With different people writing different chapters. If I were to start it off with chapter one, would anyone want to write chapter two?

I'd be up for that.

Great! I'll try to find time to get started in a few days. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 10:30 am

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Keeping a Felarya fairy alive in a Zoo shouldn't be a problem if it's set up on a magical world.

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Beautiful and cute winged humanoids that can only live on worlds filled with magic, like Felarya

I think that's misleading, since it's just describing fairies in general. For Felaryan fairies, I'm pretty sure it was either it was that they cannot survive outside Felarya, or else they couldn't size change or something. This would be why, I dunno, you only find voracious, size-changing fairies in Felarya, even though we have a sub-species that is adept in dimensional magic. Should probably ask Karbs anyway.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 11:39 am

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3) Hasn't it been confirmed that at least one Predator species off Felarya would be in quite the pickle due to their body's structure not holding up when outside Felarya's influence?

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I've never heard anything about that.

I think he's referring to Felaryan fairies, which I'm pretty sure Karbo's stated that they are a species of fairy that can only possibly survive in Felarya.

There's also that square cube law that I heard about some time ago, so there would be a problem with all giant preds. I believe you guys handwaved that by saying that Felarya has different laws of physics than our own universe. So, if a Felaryan creature ends up in our universe, it would be subject to our laws of physics, right?
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jun 27, 2009 11:47 am

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There's also that square cube law that I heard about some time ago, so there would be a problem with all giant preds. I believe you guys handwaved that by saying that Felarya has different laws of physics than our own universe. So, if a Felaryan creature ends up in our universe, it would be subject to our laws of physics, right?

Yes, giant creatures crumple and break under their own weight if you're dealing with Earth physics.

But I think we're assuming that, if not within Felarya, this would be working on a world with a similar physical framework as Felarya.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeFri Jul 03, 2009 11:14 am

Here's something to start off with. If anybody would like to continue it, it's all yours. Smile

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The slug girl had no name. At least, none that she was aware of. She had probably been given one by her mother, many years ago, but she was not aware of having had a mother. She was about as far from her birthplace as it was possible to be, but she was not aware of that, either. Her own origins were not something she had been encouraged to think about.

For that matter, she had not been encouraged to think about anything.

Which was a shame, really, because she possessed a certain natural curiosity – much diminished by a complete lack of education. She could not speak, for instance. She had never been taught to, and had no understanding of what language might be. She knew that certain sounds made by her keepers were associated with certain objects or activities. She knew that ‘Here’s a swamp toad’ meant food, and she had learnt the meaning of ‘Stay still’. She had realised, eventually, that she could mimic the sounds herself, but her keepers had frowned on that and punished her, so she had stopped doing it. In front of them, at least.

On this particular evening, she was slithering over the grounds of the large, enclosed area which was her only habitat. Sparse trees dotted the grassy ground, and an artificial brook trickled through it. They comprised the world as she knew it. She was aware of there being more, though. The tall electric fencing which kept her confined gave her a glimpse of a reality extending beyond her own. On the other side of one part of the fence, for example, small creatures came and went – as they were doing now. They looked like her, in a limited sense. They had a face very much like hers, and hair, and arms, and a chest which they kept covered over. But instead of a slug-like tail, they had two strange, moving sticks beneath the waist, and moved around on them with jerky movements. They were also a lot smaller than she was – tiny, in fact. And they smelt like food, although she could not get at them, and was not allowed to eat them. Her keepers were of this kind, too.

Although she did not know it, they called themselves ‘humans’.

These humans tended to stop and stare at her, and point, and make noises. And then they went away, free to go wherever they wanted, and more of them came, and stared and pointed. And she looked back at them, sometimes. Occasionally, she pointed back, and they made strange noises in response, but her keepers didn’t like her doing that, either.

Far more interesting was the creature living in the area next to hers, beyond another section of the fence. The slug girl inspected some of her slime trails, hoping small mammals or birds may have been trapped them, then, disappointed, slithered over to the fence which seperated her section from that of her ‘neighbour’. The latter was watching her, and the slug girl approached her with a smile.

This creature was of a normal size, unlike the tiny humans. She had a normal head, arms and torso, but, like the humans, lacked a tail. Instead, she had a dark, bulbous lower body, extending behind her, and eight articulated stick-like limbs which held her up. The slug girl often marvelled at those. It seemed impossible that anyone could move about on them, but this creature did, with apparent ease.

They looked at each other now, and the slug girl smiled. She did not know what a ‘friend’ was, but she knew she felt something for this strange, multi-legged creature. She liked being close to her, as close as she could with the electric fence between them. And the strange creature seemed to like her too.

What made it even more fascinating, in the slug girl’s eyes, was that it sometimes talked to her.

“Hey there, Slippy,” the dridder said, with a casual smile that masked a certain fondness.

The slug girl giggled. “Heyeh yippy,” she repeated, and giggled again, a little nervously. She knew they were not supposed to make noises at each other. They could get into trouble.

“Good.” The dridder smiled. “That’s a start.”

* * *


A short distance away, and a short while later, in one of the vast zoo’s administrational buildings, all manner of staff members had congregated in a large room set with blinking monitoring screens.

“How can a storm appear out of nowhere?” a middle-aged, slightly paunchy man in a white suit demanded tensely. “Explain it to me!”

“It just… appeared.” A much younger, dark-haired man in green clothing, sitting by one of the screens, shrugged, worried. “That’s what all the readings say. One moment, we have a clear blue sky. The next, a sort of… like a split in the sky, and a highly localised, really intense storm. It makes absolutely no sense.”

Although they all knew it was possible to travel between worlds –they were, after all, employees of Felarya Park–, none of them had ever heard of a naturally-occurring dimensional rift.

Thus they failed to appreciate the irony of the situation which was about to befall them.

Felarya Park was a high-profit venture, a vast zoo covering the greater part of an isolated island on a mostly aquatic planet. Visitors flocked here through dimensional gates, coming from many worlds, to admire the tame and captive creatures plucked from one of the most lethal dimensions known to man. The giant predators exhibited here had been kidnapped from Felarya in their infancy – sometimes even before birth in the case of oviparous species. They had been raised with no acknowledgement of their sentience. Never taught to speak, or think, they had been locked in large areas, kept apart from one another, for visitors to gawk at. Slug girls, dridders and nagas were trapped safely where tourists could pull faces and take pictures of them. Mermaids were confined to giant aquariums, and harpies to gigantic aviaries. Crude straps of material covered their genitals, and the chest of females, but they were otherwise left unclothed. It helped give the Park a feel that was both prudish and perversely lecherous – which had proved wildly successful in financial terms.

“How long until it hits us?” the first man asked.

A brown-haired woman grimaced, gazing at her screen with a sense of foreboding.

“Four minutes,” she said.

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“Apparently that’s called a ‘tree’,” the dridder told her slug girl neighbour, who smiled at the sound of the words, but could not yet understand them. “Tree,” the dridder repeated.

“Tree.” The slug girl smiled. “Good Swippy.”

“Yes.” The dridder grinned. It was obvious this odd, slimy creature had some form of intelligence. Perhaps, in time, the dridder could teach her to speak. It was a skill she had taken a long time to master herself. And it had remained her little secret. Hers, and that of the human who had taught her.

The human in question was one of her keepers, a young redhead girl who spoke to her with interest and sympathy. Over time, that human had opened the dridder’s mind in ways the caged spider-woman could never have conceived of. Her thought processes still had a long way to develop, but, with words at her disposal for the first time, she was indeed beginning to think.

“Tree,” the slug girl said again – not a word, but a mere sound. The dridder nodded, and looked up at the darkening sky, huge black clouds roiling across the clear blue expanse. There was a rumble of thunder. Some of the humans shouted, and began running for cover. The slug girl looked up, too, concern on her attractive young face.

“Tree!” she exclaimed, pointing up at the thick clouds.

“No, not tree,” the dridder said softly. And it was then that the lightning struck. Bolts of light flashed down from the sky, sizzling down with deafening claps of thunder. Without warning, light rushed over the fence, traversing it with bright, crackling intensity. The slug girl yelped, and lurched back, frightened. The dridder, too, scuttled out of the way. She blinked, alarmed at this entirely new phenomenon.

She had seen storms before, but not like this.

“Tree?” the slug girl whispered, shaken and confused.

“Attention, attention!” Calm yet urgent, the deep male voice boomed through the air, carried by unseen loudspeakers. “Would all visitors please make their way back to the portals? I repeat, visitors please make your way back to the portals. Thank you.”

Beyond the fence, humans were moving past, almost all going in the same direction. The dridder scuttled over to watch them.

As she did so, she noticed something else that was unusual. A bright, red and orange bird flew down, swooping in the wind, and landed atop the high fence.

It took her a moment to realise the bird was touching the fence, without being electrocuted. When that realisation clicked, she stared at it for a long time. Slowly, something in her mind stirred.

She was thinking, once more.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeFri Jul 03, 2009 12:15 pm

This is a delicious idea!
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeFri Jul 03, 2009 4:48 pm

what a great start ! I love very much the setting lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeFri Jul 03, 2009 5:08 pm

What are the plans for multiple contributors to this?
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeFri Jul 03, 2009 5:37 pm

Nice beginning here- I could write up the next part unless someone else wants to.

By the way, would you prefer to keep control over these two or would you prefer for the next writers to take control over them? I was planning on taking the perspective mainly to a different part of the facility if not.

So I guess I'm asking if you mean to treat it as a roleplay with viewpoints respective to the writers, or a baton-passing story? Just so I'm clear on how it'll be handled.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeFri Jul 03, 2009 6:19 pm

Hum, I'm slightly interested. But if I added a bit I think I'd prefer to do a different part of the facility as well. I think it would be cool if it was sort of like a non-connected roleplay, thus allowing the whole thing to sort of be told at once from different perspectives and areas.
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PostSubject: Re: Felarya Park   Felarya Park Icon_minitimeSat Jul 04, 2009 3:02 am

Thank you, everyone. Smile I was thinking of it being "baton-passing", and I have no objection at all to anyone writing about the characters I introduced. So feel free to continue with them, or to switch to another part of the park, as you prefer.

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