The new Felarya Manga

Karbo struck again! This one drives home a point that I like: Don't judge an entire species baised off of a few individuals.

And that little bit about Harpies at the end made me chuckle. ^_^

Only 2 perverts early on? Their dwindeling.

Perverts? What do you mean?

Flare wrote:

Perverts? What do you mean?

You didn't see the guy zooming in on Anna with binoculars? Or the one that used his power to grope?

I think that's the same guy.

And face it...if you were him, would you do that if you could get away with it?

XD I bet many would !

I am glad you liked it !

Made me smile at least, especally since I'm not feeling too well here. ^_^V

One of the good point about this manga it shown the biggest thing at Vivian is not her chest but her ego.
If her chest was a big as her ego she won't be able to move.

Flare wrote:

Made me smile at least, especally since I'm not feeling too well here. ^_^V

Feel better Flare.

And Vivian's ego isn't...ok you got me, but you have to admit, her looks almost make up for it. maybe 90% of her ego is justified...

I'm just glad to see more Felarya based artwork. I know I'm not the only one who's experienced it when some one creates some thing awsome then for one reason or another, gives up. Which makes me glad Karbo hasn't, despite the many day-to-day issues with just being human. It's good to see some one who actually devotes themselves to their work.

And you know...I just realized something: This one came out not even 6 months after the first one. For something like this, that was a good turnover.

Ibought it this morning, and thoroughly enjoyed it

Thank you !

Flare : well yes it went pretty fast. It was kinda stuck in my head XD

Flare wrote:

I think that's the same guy.

And face it...if you were him, would you do that if you could get away with it?

It wasn't the same person, and almost anyone would do that. Even if they couldn't get away with it.

Just bought the tome. ^^ Made me so happy to see that you decided to pull through, Karbo! I wish you all the riches <3

I was pleasanly surprised how much I came to like Lea. :3 And the part with Vivian x Crisis struck home with me. x3 Even if only hinted... Great approval!

Now all I have to do is wait for Tome 3. ; ;

What do people about like Lea, anyway?

I would have bought this if some certain people hadn't screwed up my payments. So no manga for me yet. T_T

Garnet wrote:

Just bought the tome. ^^ Made me so happy to see that you decided to pull through, Karbo! I wish you all the riches <3

I was pleasanly surprised how much I came to like Lea. :3 And the part with Vivian x Crisis struck home with me. x3 Even if only hinted... Great approval!

Now all I have to do is wait for Tome 3. ; ;

Thank you

Well-I loved the second manga just as much as the first! Well done Karbo! Once again you've produced a masterpiece of art and writing!

Poor old Anna really had a hard time. But it was nice to see Vivian and Lea in the spotlight.

I like Lea. I find her a gentle, level headed girl unbound by predjudice.

Thank you ! I'm really glad you liked it

Alrighty, I've *finally* gotten the chance to sit down and read this (don't ask; I've been uncomfortably busy lately), and I must say, I am very impressed. As much as I like the first one, the second tome surpasses it in just about every way, and I'm not just saying that because it was considerably longer and featured some vore of the type to which I'm typically drawn. The only real exception is the first one's subtitle, but then I don't think anything will ever top 'Adventurer's in Crisis' as far as awesome puns go.

I think my favorite bits were where Crisis had her little 'mission failed' moment; she just looked so hilariously crestfallen, I actually laughed out loud, which doesn't happen very often to me. As well as the 'come on, don't be sissies' line. And of course, just about everything involving Vivian.

There was some interesting character exploration, especially with Lea, who apparently has nerves of steel. Not having a heart attack when Crisis leaps out at you from nowhere is an impressive feat, even if you do know she's not hostile.

You left us on kind of a cliffhanger, with Lady Lesona's plan and the nature of Lea's curse, not mention we don't know what Vivian is up to yet either. So you've certainly got me dying to see what happens next.

I would also like to commend you for not making a single Portal joke throughout the whole Voidfinger sequence. You are a far stronger man than I.

Hehe glad you liked it !
The mission failled moment was very funny to draw, I was giggling all the way to myself while drawing it XD

Because i played it long ago and it was badly translated, I don't have that much Portal jokes in mind ^^;
Anything that you thought specially about ? XP

Karbo wrote:

Because i played it long ago and it was badly translated, I don't have that much Portal jokes in mind ^^;
Anything that you thought specially about ? XP

Aw, that's a shame, half of what was awesome about Portal was the humor, (GLaDOS is one of my favorite characters of all time) though I'm not sure how well it would work in another language, even if the translation was good. I suppose that's true of most kinds of non-visual humor though.

But yeah, several simply awful ideas come readily to mind, relating to cake and lies, or GLaDOS's little momentum speech especially. Definitely better to leave them out, I think, despite my weakness for inserting inappropriate Portal references into things.

karbo you speak good enough english, you could always just play the raw =3

Please place the weighted storage cube on the heavy duty super colliding super button.
Good job, please move quickly to the next chamber lock as the effects of prolong exposure to the button are not part of this test.

I just forgot to say : you are very welcome if you wish to suggest things you would like to see in a potential tome 3

Be it a direction you believe the scenario should be taking, or a certain scene you would like to see. I don't guarantee this will be used in the end, but it sure helps me to see what people are expecting

Hmm. I guess seeing the succubi cousins would be a cool thing to explore. Katrika starting to stalk Anna would also be funny. Maybe Anko almost eating Léa? Anko doesn't appear enough. The only other thing I could think of would maybe be exploring Crisis's past and introducing more of the fairy characters. Or you could do whatever you want.