Titleless Surrounding (Revision)

Titleless Surrounding – A vast carving embedded into the city grounds. The symbol is a single and massive figure found throughout Negav. It was crafted with magic, and as the area grows the image twists onto newer territory. Several lines connect onto the Isolon Eye. Its appearance takes the upper torso of a woman, as it continues the lower body shifts into various tails and legs. The design carries from numerous species; it flows similar to a chimera yet during the same moment would combine as if there were no difference to any single part, while hair would grow and the back stretched the figure would alter and develop an assortment of wings, the ears would set into two and change between elves, neko, humans, even dogs.

Recently connected the symbol serves as a backup of power. It manages the union between, the city’s eye and as a funnel delivers its protection onto the surrounding areas of Negav. In the event of Isolon’s failure, the symbol doubles its work to ensure its power is well transfer through the area. At the same time Titleless shares its own and individual powers. Then by releasing certain patterns releases a stored energy back into Negav.

The craft although recognized remains ever mysterious as no one seems to recall the day of its addition. Buried within memories even the highest of Ps’isol only retain that it has always been and in their doubt added it into Negav’s security. There even are rumors suggesting that the reason nobody remembers is because the symbol itself never was, others simple state a massive creature lies beneath. Unfortunately their suspicion is well founded, how can what is, simply never be and to what extent can a person remember knowledge regarding a position but never creation. Perhaps the answer remains with a single fragment, to a grain of Akaptorian sand disconnected and away in the flows of time. Nevertheless it remains but half a story as a clear and current interference is called onto the stand.

(I would like some feedback, please post.)

(EDIT: ADDED SPACING)

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Um I admit I have trouble to figure exactly what you mean in the last paragraph ^^;

As I said earlier, I think the ideas of those symbols running around Negav is a bit difficult to implement because it really change the general design of the city and the point of their existence is not totaly clear to me.. I mean the influence of the Isolon eye, don't really need to be spread in Negav itself does it ?