The Jungle Bowl

Well.... I guess I will through my hat into the ring. Whats your opinion on the jungle bowl? Always looking for fresh opinions and input I am^^

Twas nice, twas good - twas nostalgic.

Heh, I have and I think that it's one of the best stories out there bro.

twas nice of both of you to say^^

Read what all's been posted. Took a spot to get off the ground, but I like it. Distinct characters, plenty of backstory, doesn't fall into cliche at all. I think it has quite a bit of potential to continue on, too.
One of the better examples of what one can do with the subject.

You definitely need a few easter eggs.

Rythmear wrote:

You definitely need a few easter eggs.

oh? what would you have in mind?

@GREGOLE: yeah there is quite a lot of it now isn't there^^; I am glad i didn't fall into a cliche though^^ and yes i have a lot planed... yes much .... its just a fricken pain to write>_<

Well for instance, in my story chapter "The Hidden", I included a reference to an artist and a writer entering Felarya and never being seen again - they were named "Rathmere" and "Krabo"

ahh... no. I will not be doing stuff like that I don't think^^;

My thing was only a one liner - it wasn't in depth or anything, they're just subtle references.

yeah. I just think that stuff does a lot to pull the reader out of the story, I try to keep them wrapped up in the world as much as possible. immersion is one of the better ways to get people really into it, as well as make it easier to write.

Absolutely, but then again my stories took references from everywhere so it was acceptable.

Read it all with time and I've to say; my respect on such a good work

Thank you kindly Ravana^^

He certainly knows how it is.

yes he does^^

I don't know anything about anyones gender here so I just assume everyone is a man unless they tell me otherwise.

off course I've read it typewriter

I've read it as well, and i loved it. my only problem with it is waiting for the next chapter. it really is one of the best stories having to do with Felarya our there.

^^; heh, I am working on that update.... ^^

Cypress wrote:

^^; heh, I am working on that update.... ^^

awsome, can't wait. i'll be as close to first in line to read it as i can.

Only started reading out of it, will continue to do so.