My Characters (Altira and Hirena)

These are the bio's for my characters set in Felarya, at the moment im going to be leaving large parts of Altira's bio out and only update it when we learn more about her in the story (found here).

Name: Altira
Age: *Unknown* (Looks around 16)
Gender: Female
Height: 5'4"
Hair colour: Blue
Eye colour: Blue

Other notable factors:
Having visited many other worlds she has extensive survival skills and know to exercise extreme caution when visiting foreign worlds. Not much more is known about her at this time.

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Name: Hirena
Species: Naga
Gender: Female
Height (head to ground): 5'8"
Hair colour: Dark indigo
Eye colour: Blue
Tail Colours/Markings: Black with blue swirling patterns and a lighter blue underbelly.

Other notable factors:

[Under Construction]

Well, while your intent may have been good, I can tell you that this is not the sort of thing this portion of the forum is for. If you wish to reveal more about your character as the story progresses, then why not simply ask that people read the story outright? Cutting down on any clutter is a good thing.