Kitten's New Improved Characters

Name: Prophet
Gender: Female
Species: Dridder
Age: 25
Height: 8ft
Skin Colour: Caucasian
Eye Colour: Emerald Green
Hair: Prophet's hair is a lovely brown colour, it hangs down to just below her shoulders, but it is often tied back in a bun.
Makeup: Prophet only wears a little makeup, typicly her lips are a glossy pink colour.
Clothing: Prophet wears a woolen coat, with a linen lining to give it proper shape around her upper half, it has gold trimmings and the buttons appear to have been made from gold. However the coat is not buttoned all the way to the top, infact the two top buttons are left open.

Weapons: Prophet carries an oak shortbow, the quiver is strapped onto her back. The arrows are tipped with a nerve venom that temporarily paralysis her opponents. Prophet uses this bow to take down large groups from a distance before she moves in, she also uses it to escape any trouble she may be in.

Personality: Prophet foccuses on Opportunities, be they for a meal or some fun. Prophet enjoys the company of humans, regardless of how they got to be in her comany. She respects them for what they wear, the technology they carry and what their culture has acheived. Prophet's voice and manner of speaking are similar to those of an upper class citizen, and at times she uses old words that are no longer used such as 'Thee, Art, Hither' for example, however she does also speak the modern language well it's just that some of her words are older than others. Prophet despises Vulgar language, she would gag any prey using it. She is also considerably modest, she doesn't like being nude as she finds it to be too cold, however she doesn't mind her prey being nude and she tries to cocoon them quickly, so they aren't too cold.

Where does she live: Prophet has made her home at the base of a large tree in the dridder forest, she has created a wooden door that is well camoflaged, she has also carved out a cave beneath the tree amongst the roots. The cave consists of around Four chambers, the main chamber where she keeps books, scrolls and her weapon by the door, a second chamber acts as a bedroom while the third acts as the larder. Each chamber has a wooden door, only the entrance and the larder are bolted, the larder is almost entirely covered in silk. The bedroom consists of a large bed made from silk, clothing, leaves and what appears to be pillows, possibly taken from empty campsites. The fourth Chamber is storage, she uses it to store interesting weapons and items she takes from her prey alongside clothing. Prophet gained her home from her parents and has been in her family for at least three generations.

Hunting Habits: Prophet's favourite meal are females, she eats tinies often and when she can, she goes after human sized prey. Prophet does not discriminate in age, though with younger prey she tends to treat them with more care than older people. Though she considers human sized prey and tinies food, she also considers them people and has no problem chatting to her prey before she eats them, infact she enjoys the 'dinner' coversation, she also has no problems with forming a relationship with her potential prey. Prophet has a fascination with clothing and will gladly trade fine clothing for the life of her human sized prey, she will also trade books for the life of her prey, provided she does not already have it.

Background: Prophet has lived in her home since she was born, origannaly she lived with her mother and father, but they went missing one night and she took over their old room. Prophet's family has lived in the dridder forest for generations and as far as Prophet is aware all of her family has been 'civilised' wearing clothing to cover themselves. Her mothers reason for this was that the nights are very cold, Prophet doesn't agree with this. The dridder woman knows little of her families history, only that they have lived in her home, in the dridder forest for generations and she does not plan on leaving anytime soon. Prophet rarely leaves the dridder forest, all her hunts take place within, a place that interests her is the city of Ur-Sagol, however she has only visited this ruined city three times.

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Characters below will be updated accordingly, their just there to keep the place there will be proper characters there.

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Name: Rhea
Gender: Female
Species: Fairy
Age: Thirty-Two
Height: Various, Normaly Five Foot
Skin Colour: Light Brown
Eye Colour: Electric Blue
Hair: Short brown hair that hangs down to just below her ears, mostly so it does not get in the way during combat.
Makeup: Glossy pink lips
Bust Size: C-Cup
Clothing: Rhea wears no clothing, save for a pair of brown gladiator sandals and a brown belt around her waist, that her sword attaches to.
Armour: On her head Rea wears a golden Thracian Helmet, over her chest she wears a golden breastplate, her backplate has a circular hole, in order to let her wings move freely. On her legs she wears a pair of golden half greaves. (Note: The armour is not made from gold, just coloured gold the armour itself is actualy made of bronze.)
Weapons: Rhea carries a Dory, a spear with a wooden shaft and golden tip, strapped to her waist she carries a steel, short sword. With her left hand Rhea carries a circuler sheild, known as the Aspis, it is plain and has yet to have a design engraved upon it.
Skills: Rhea is a capable warrior and hightly skilled with fists, the spear and her sword. Like other fairies she can use size altering magic and has a minor control over healing magic.
Personality: Rhea is stern and down to earth, when given a task she gets to it and does not stop until the job is done, to her everything else is a secondary task. The fairy has a soter side, even if she does not show it often, Rhea has a soft spot for children.The fairy woman is a fierce warrior, and a highly capable leader. She makes it her duty to learn the names of the people she works with, makes it her duty to earn the trust of others. Rhea believes that before she can trust someone or vice versa, that trust has to be earned. Despite what she looks like Rea does have a sense of humour, she doesnt show it much, she barely shows emotion, not wanting to reveal anything that could be exploited. Rea considers some of her kin, to be uncultured, childish and very unreliable, so she rarely interacts with them.
Job: Mercenary
Where does she live: Rhea does not live in a specific location, rather she moves from town to town, offering her services as a soldier for hire, to anyone who pays the right price.
Hunting Habits: Rhea eats a variety of things, she will eat the things a normal fairy would do, such as humans When on a job Rhea will eat the same food as those she's working with or for, mainly to make them more comfortable around her. But given the opportunity in these cirumstances she will snack on live meals.
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I loved the way you wrote this bio! Very nice. Detialed and to the point. A few parts were a bit vaguge or didn't seem to belong, but that may have been becuase I was reading it on a cellphone XD I love her house. The way you describe it having "larder" is kinda amusing. Also funny to see a smart dressed pred let alone. Same size vore though. For a minute you had me beleiving she was a giantess! XD Hard to beleive that she's only just alittle taller than a human. One thing though. You didn't describe her dridder body and what it looks like. ^_^;

Seems to lack a description of how she looks, like her hair, her dridders bodies form, her body type, just giving some pointers.

Solomon wrote:

Seems to lack a description of how she looks.

Also I don't really care to much for this character, its another bug to smash as far as I care. Nothing against you I just don't like the character, nothing more and nothing less.

Because you can totally make something better, am I right?

If the character doesn't interest you at least have the decency to be polite about it

Solomon wrote:

I don't really care to much for this character, its another bug to smash as far as I care. Nothing against you I just don't like the character, nothing more and nothing less.

This post is unhelpful and blatantly pointless.

If you can't point out anything in particular that needs fixing nor be constructive, you would best leave this to those who have something to say. Their advice may be worded better or worse- but it's something.