Wiki corrections

Lilly is not one who like to stand still,

From Lily's entry. Her name takes only one 'l'. Also, I don't think Hazel can be a color for hair since Hazel eyes tend to kinda change color.

Fleeing the insects the tribe moved west, to Nemyra kingdom.

From Temi's entry. I know it's technically right, but we should call it Fairy Kingdom. Also, I propose that Lily's Other Characteristic is big, black freckles, because her mug shot gives it away.

Sean Okotami wrote:

Lilly is not one who like to stand still,

From Lily's entry. Her name takes only one 'l'.

Fixed, along with a pluralization error I noticed.

Sean Okotami wrote:

Also, I don't think Hazel can be a color for hair since Hazel eyes tend to kinda change color.

I thought Hazel was a brown color?

Karbo could always mean it's the same color as an hazelnut as wikipedia specifies hazel as an eye color.

I have an idea to figure out what her hair colour should be called. Just figure out what Crayola colour it is and give it the corresponding name. ^_^

For eye colour, wikipedia has this to say about hazel:
"Hazel eyes are due to a combination of Rayleigh scattering and a moderate amount of melanin in the iris's anterior border layer. Hazel eyes often appear to shift in color from a light brown to a dark golden-green. A number of studies using three-point scales have assigned hazel to be the medium color between the lightest shade of blue and darkest shade of brown. Hazel mostly consists of brown and green. The dominant color in the eye can either be green or light brown/gold. This can sometimes produce a multicolored iris, i.e., an eye that is light brown/amber near the pupil and charcoal or dark green on the outer part of the iris (and vice versa) when observed in sunlight. Hazel is commonly found in Europe (especially Southern Europe), the Middle East, North Africa, the Americas, Central Asia, and parts of South Asia.

Definitions of the eye color hazel vary: it is sometimes considered to be synonymous with light brown or gold, as in the color of a hazelnut shell."

(Source)

I tend to describe my eyes as golden, but a lot of people call them hazel.






They always have a permanent greenish rim that sometimes expands into the brown, changing the overall color of my iris.




I don't see any issue with describing hair colour that way though. I've known quite a few people that have hair that appears to shimmer or change appearance when exposed to varying degrees of light. Given the nature of some of the critters in Felarya, I imagine this would not be an issue.

Guess that means I have to edit Fairy 'Tales' *shrug*

Wiki Corrections.

Quote :

Felarya possesses a wide variety of metals, stones, or gems found only there. The unstability of this world and the strange physical phenomena that occur there sometimes grant these materials very strange and unique properties.

Should read:

Quote :

Felarya possesses a wide variety of metals, stones, or gems found only there. The instability of this world and the strange physical phenomena that occur there sometimes grant these materials very strange and unique properties.

Felarya and the Correctors from outside, leaving many to believe the Tiitans and the Correctors were indeed in league.

From the Titan Lore entry, you put two i in Titans

thank you

On the dridder's page, shouldn't the picture of Ciel be placed with Bolas dridders, as that's the type she is? Rather than between Gerridi and Trapdoor? People might get the wrong ideas, especially where the Gerridi are concerned.

ops my mistake

Some suggested words for skin color: pale ,pale pinkish, tan, mocha, fair, tan, swarthy, dark, chocolate, ebony, milky white, black, light purple, blue, grey, green, brown.

Tan is used twice.

Sean Okotami wrote:

Some suggested words for skin color: pale ,pale pinkish, tan, mocha, fair, tan, swarthy, dark, chocolate, ebony, milky white, black, light purple, blue, grey, green, brown.

Tan is used twice.

This was only on the Template page, right? In any case I fixed it on that page.

Yes it was.

From Anna's entry: Anna doesn't loose control often (You mean doesn't lose control often)

Sean Okotami wrote:

From Anna's entry: Anna doesn't loose control often (You mean doesn't lose control often)

Fixed.

The link to Lyiba-MoonEye's DA page on her Ceil picture under Dridder Races does not correctly link to her page. The link adds an additional trailing slash to the url that will cause it not to load.

aethernavale wrote:

The link to Lyiba-MoonEye's DA page on her Ceil picture under Dridder Races does not correctly link to her page. The link adds an additional trailing slash to the url that will cause it not to load.

Fixed.

Nothing major but when I went to read Déméchrelle's wiki bio I placed my mouse over the picture and it said "Anko" instead of Déméchrelle.

alright ^^

DaNoob13 wrote:

Nothing major but when I went to read Déméchrelle's wiki bio I placed my mouse over the picture and it said "Anko" instead of Déméchrelle.

Looks like Karbo fixed that one.

To the Golem Entry: They are very hard to dammage however,

Remove the extra "m" in damage.

Sean Okotami wrote:

To the Golem Entry: They are very hard to dammage however,

Remove the extra "m" in damage.

Fixed, along with a few other things.

In the Felaryan Rivers section, the Myriad river is blank. There are ideas I've put in for it here

https://felarya.forumotion.com/new-ideas-f2/mond-myriad-river-t1705.htm?highlight=myriad

someone needs to go and fill it in.