A Brand New World

I restarted my stories, this is the first Arc and Chapter 1.

http://seanokotami.deviantart.com/art/A-Brand-New-World-I-80934878

It doesn't take place in Felarya yet, but it's hinted that it will.

Chapter two is here. It's short, more of an interlude than anything.

http://seanokotami.deviantart.com/art/A-Brand-New-World-II-81202921

I added a poll to see if my two OC should meet a character right away, or should I use one of my other character.

I need your votes for the next chapter.

Well I didn't voted because it's a tie between 1&2 for me ^^;

I think they shoud meet one local but who I don't know..

I would meet someone's OC first. Meating with Crisis or Anna or someone like that seems too soon and your OC's would have no chance.

I would suggest a human OC to get them somewhere safe, or get them into a bit of trouble IDK.

I'm gonna agree with Manga up there. I'd suggest building up the character before having them meet somebody else.

And if by any chance they encounter Crisis or Anna later on, remember six things in front of them;

1. Do not act like food.
2. Do not smoke.
3. Act cool.
4. Do not smoke.
5. Make sure you have a convincing story for Crisis.
6. DO NOT SMOKE.

Hope that helps. Happy story writing.

Pendragon wrote:

I'm gonna agree with Manga up there. I'd suggest building up the character before having them meet somebody else.

And if by any chance they encounter Crisis or Anna later on, remember six things in front of them;

1. Do not act like food.
2. Do not smoke.
3. Act cool.
4. Do not smoke.
5. Make sure you have a convincing story for Crisis.
6. DO NOT SMOKE.

Hope that helps. Happy story writing.

i think you forgot

7 sing well
8 no smoke residue on you

Ah. I knew I forgot something. Silly me.

Thank you.

Hmm, well I think I should use Kay to get them out of trouble for now. But from the second arc they will meet other characters. There's just one problem, I really have problems trying to picture someone right. It's like I get 70% of them, but the remaining 30% is out of character.

At last, here's chapter 3.

http://seanokotami.deviantart.com/art/A-Brand-New-World-III-81628566

Warning, I edited the third chapter. It is a bit slower paced, it shows more someone's reaction, and there is a cliffhanger. If you read the third chapter, read it again as this one is quite different.

I bet Sean wished he had spider sense. Lol.