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nipa101 Naga food
Posts : 36 Join date : 2014-06-12 Age : 28 Location : Silver Cove
| Subject: The War of Silver Cove Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:10 am | |
| hay nipa101 here and I'm here today to make some things clear before I relies the silver scales story line.
Ok the first thing you need to know is that through the first part of the storyline you will see how a bad chain of events lead to a mermaid attacking silver cove and when Tyler defeated the mermaid it lead to ultimately starting this confect between all nagas of the silver scales tribe being in war with all mermaids around silver cove. Ok as horrible as this sounds Tyler and the silver scales do not hate all mermaids and only engage them if they are attacking silver cove.
however in later events when Tyler tried to make peace with the mermaids in their underwater city he and his high ranking consuls members where lead into a deserted area where they where betrayed by their escorts and Tyler was the only one that made it out of the city alive.
After this Tyler put all kinds of mermaids as kill or be killed for all members of the silver scales tribe and started making weapon projects that focused on hurting mermaids more that anything else. most new weapons involved lightning.
the rest you will have to find out for yourself in the story line but in simple the silver scales tribe are not trying to be evil they are just in a bad place that they have been trying to get out of for 50 years and as you read the story line you will fill for them...
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Amaroq Great warrior
Posts : 470 Join date : 2008-07-19 Age : 36
| Subject: Re: The War of Silver Cove Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:12 am | |
| I think you should advertize your stories in the story section, because placing it here is pretty misleading and confusing for people who dont read stories at all (like me). <.<
If its not advertisement but some kind of information about a story you are about to release, you may want to think about rewriting certain parts of your story and include the information there in an understandable, more easily readable way, because needing external information to understand a plot is certainly not the best way of storytelling.
Not trying to be mean here, im merely giving advice. | |
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nipa101 Naga food
Posts : 36 Join date : 2014-06-12 Age : 28 Location : Silver Cove
| Subject: Re: The War of Silver Cove Sun Aug 03, 2014 5:14 am | |
| ok I understand but this just seams like the most logical place to put something like. And sorry about my spelling I'm not very good at it but I can still right very long and intersecting story's and with the help of editors I know I can do this.
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jedi-explorer Felarya cartographer
Posts : 1474 Join date : 2011-12-06 Age : 36 Location : Fantasy Land ^_^
| Subject: Re: The War of Silver Cove Sun Aug 03, 2014 1:02 pm | |
| - nipa101 wrote:
however in later events when Tyler tried to make peace with the mermaids in their underwater city of Ryzelm’oire Ryzelm'oire is not a Mermaid controlled city. Read the page: http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Ryzelm%27oire - The Wiki wrote:
- Ryzelm’oire:
Danger: Very Low to High Sub zones: the Spires, the Bazaar, the Catacombs, Shapers’Guild, the Bubble Inhabitants: Chlaenas, Cecaelias, many other species.
It is a Chaelana city. ^_^; Perhaps you should invent your own society of Mermaids? Since I don't know of any city controlled by giant mermaids. In fact allot about their government and social structure has yet to be developed if I'm not mistaken. | |
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nipa101 Naga food
Posts : 36 Join date : 2014-06-12 Age : 28 Location : Silver Cove
| Subject: Re: The War of Silver Cove Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:22 pm | |
| jedi-explorer I understand your concern really I do and I made this thread to try and make it clear that the silver scales are not so bad and I promise you that any mermaid character that you have made will not be hurt and will live a long and happy life.
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nipa101 Naga food
Posts : 36 Join date : 2014-06-12 Age : 28 Location : Silver Cove
| Subject: Re: The War of Silver Cove Thu Aug 07, 2014 4:32 am | |
| and as for the mermaid city I'm working on it all looks good so far and ever thing is starting to slide into place and guess what even Anko will be a part she is sort of a old time hero of the city;) sorry I cannot tell you much but you going to love it (Hint, Hint involves vore;) | |
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nipa101 Naga food
Posts : 36 Join date : 2014-06-12 Age : 28 Location : Silver Cove
| Subject: The silver scales story line Thu Aug 07, 2014 5:21 am | |
| hay everyone niap101 here and today I'm going to show you a somewhat sort of time line into the silver scales tribe and the order of how all the events unfolded. The Grate War of Silver Cove: from when Tyler and 50 of his family members where first born and goes for 50 years. under construction: under construction... under construction: under construction... as you can see there are two more important time line dates up there and I have named them and worked on them but I don't want to relies there names Intel the first part known as (The Grate War of Silver Cove) is complete. once and only once the first part of the silver scales story line is complete will I relies the second hart. sorry if I'm being one of those people but the silver scales story line is unlike anything Felarya has ever seen before and I think your all really going to like it. By doing it like this I think you are really going to be hocked and want to see more once I relies the first part so stay tuned and soon the first part of the silver scales story line will be within your reach. (P.S I'm looking for a prof reader for my story's so if you want to help me before I relies some of work contact me by email and I will send you the complete story of what I'm about to relies and just think about it this is a grate way to read about it before anyone else dose . so if your interested in helping me contact me but email and thank you for your time)
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Ilceren Moderator
Posts : 677 Join date : 2012-05-10 Age : 34 Location : Spain
| Subject: Re: The War of Silver Cove Thu Aug 07, 2014 6:08 am | |
| Well, since you're talking about a few things that will happen in your story and not about an idea you had in order to better develop Mermaids in general, I think this should go at the Stories Discussion, like Amaroq said. I'll be moving it there.
P.D.: I've merged it with the storyline topic too, since I don't see the need for two separate topics. | |
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nipa101 Naga food
Posts : 36 Join date : 2014-06-12 Age : 28 Location : Silver Cove
| Subject: Re: The War of Silver Cove Thu Aug 07, 2014 7:11 am | |
| thank you Ilceren I'm not very good at pleasing thing as you can see so yer thanks:) | |
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