Felarya - The Land Unknown

Excuse the cheesy title, but that's all I could come up with. I re-wrote my stories again, and I must say, it flows much more smoothly in that new style. I'll admit it, GREGOLE was right to advise me to read Rin's Adventures. Anyway, the chapters will come at least only once a week, I still have tons of stories to read and re-read.

So, without further ado, the first chapter:

http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-I-82737342

Here's chapter 2.

http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-II-83895378

At last, Chapter 3 is here.

http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-III-85271696

The conclusion to that arc, Chapter 4.

http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-IV-85582103

BEST ARC EVAR!!!!!!!!

Googlememan wrote:

BEST ARC EVAR!!!!!!!!

It was only the first, how can it be the best?

ok BEST ARC EVAR sssooooooo far XD!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, I remade chapter 4. I eliminated superflous lines, changed some reactions, and some dialogues. Also, I made use of Microsoft Word to help me correct my grammar.

http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Felarya-The-Land-Unknown-IV-85637431

chapter 4 is even better know XD

Stop calling humans "earthlings."
It's... Weird.

Anime-Junkie wrote:

Stop calling humans "earthlings."
It's... Weird.

It's just that my two characters are from Earth. Any other humans aren't called Earthlings.

Googlememan wrote:

chapter 4 is even better know XD

I actually deleted the old one and reuploaded a brand new chapter 4 deviation.

I rewrote Chapter 5. However, it turned too big for DA. So, I split it in two parts.

Part One

Part Two

Sean Okotami wrote:

I rewrote Chapter 5. However, it turned too big for DA. So, I split it in two parts.

Part One

Part Two

Uh... many of my chapters are ten pages minimum and it supports them. Your's aren't nearly that long at times... six or seven by my count... but I'm not the best when it comes to math. How long exactly is it?

Spykeofkonoha wrote:

Sean Okotami wrote:

I rewrote Chapter 5. However, it turned too big for DA. So, I split it in two parts.

Part One

Part Two

Uh... many of my chapters are ten pages minimum and it supports them. Your's aren't nearly that long at times... six or seven by my count... but I'm not the best when it comes to math. How long exactly is it?

According to Microsoft Word character counter, I got a bit over 62000 characters. The limit on DA is 65535 if I remeber correctly. However, on DA, pressing Return count for four characters, and changing the font I think count for 30. So in the long run, I kinda got over the limit.