The Predator of Predators!

Here is my entry to Karbo's competition! I hope you all enjoy! And I hope you like it as well Karbo =3

I hope you all think Roxanne is an interesting character as well! I might use her more then =3 But this is not a series! This is a story about a day in her life!

Lol the story is too long, so here is part one

It was a burning hot day in the Chidokai forest, the rain season had passed for now, and only the sun was high in the sky. Its radiance shined in through the various dense pockets of foliage that the countless trees provided. The forest of Chidokai had many thick trees, making it the perfect place for humans or small prey to escape through. Much larger predators usually became stuck trying to squeeze through narrow passages in the massive lumber.
The Chidokai was a haven for Nagas, Dryads and various other creatures that either enjoyed the wetness, the protection of the forests, or just the volume of meals that pass on through there!
However, today, around mid-afternoon was a rather strange sight! Such a rare appearance of one of Felarya’s most deadly predators was occurring! Out in the middle of an open pocket of land, the hot rays of the bright sunlight poured over the glorious golden figure of a Succubus! The beautiful figure laid on a rock, her legs crossed and her arms cupped behind her head. She slept deeply, her chest rising and falling with each breath, her long prehensile tongue hung limply from her plump lips, beads of drool rolling down the long muscle.
The succubus was gorgeous beyond all compare. Her figure was curvaceous and exotic, her breasts large and full like dumplings. Her pussy was shaven and very soft to the touch, and since she was a succubus it was that touch that she indulged in. The bosom was soft, yet perfectly firm and nicely proportioned to her toned, meaty rear. Her belly was rather plump, making a not-too-noticeable dome on her tummy. She had short cut purple hair, styled in a very unique and lovely way. Her bangs made a frame around her face while the excess hair was spiked around in a jagged pattern behind her head to make an appearance like that of the sun. Poking out from her hair was a pair of short, rounded off horns that were as black and glossy as a shard of obsidian. Her amethyst colored eyes were hidden by the fact that her eye-lids were closed. She snoozed the day away, deciding to have a nice sun bath, rather delighting in the heat that this world brought. Her skin was already a nice, golden tan color from her long days of sunbathing. Across her back, lying limply, were her malevolent wings, leather-like skin stretched between each cross-section of bone, and electric-purple like the most brilliant arc of lightning. The backside of those wings were as black as the darkest night, glistening with the reflection of the sun.
Roxanne was her name, and she was the typical fire type that most succubi were, whom had served on some of the lowest layers of hell, punishing the most brutal and most deserving of victims on a daily basis. But every once and awhile she loved to indulge herself in a good vacation to the mortal realm, to have herself a good ol’ time engorging herself with meals and overindulging in sex. But it was only recently that she realized that….she liked Felarya too much! Back in hell she would usually be punishing males, and she may have found them tasty, but she realized that out on the surface world, she was able to gobble up all the females she wanted! No lords to get mad at her for eating something she wasn’t supposed to! On Felarya she had complete freedom and independence; this is why she decided to stay here!
As the day went along, the succubus’s eyes soon opened, those violet gems sparkling and focusing to adjust to the sudden influx of light. Murring a bit she slides up and stretches. Giggling proudly she let out loud yawn as she raised her arms up high. Her breasts bounced buoyantly at her quick action. Soon rising onto her feet she murmured and chuckled rather proudly.
Once on her feet, a person on a more giant standard would notice how short she is. The purple-haired succubus was only 55 ft tall! Most demons and succubi would tease her, pushing on the top of her head or saying sordid comments about her. But it didn’t faze her, especially since she had a very special ‘diet.’ Roxanne was known all across hell for being a well known cannibal. If anyone made a simple size joke to her, she would either shrink them down or swallow them whole! It didn’t matter if the demon was twice as tall as her and three times as broad, she can and will swallow them!
But that’s not to say she is a heartless eating machine. In fact of all the succubi, Roxanne has to be the lazier and even nice succubus, despite being a Fire Succubus even! Well…as for the nice part, she at least lets her meals die with a smile on their face. She murmured a bit and swished her spade shaped tail behind her, rubbing at her virgin eyes as she looked all around and giggled.
“What to do today~ I could use some breakfast~!” She said. Roxanne’s voice just oozed sensuality and youth, a voice that made both sexes drool with desire by the first syllable.
With a cute little smile across her face she sauntered along, her feet quite quiet, her wings kept close to her back to prevent any noise to resonate from wind breezing over the membrane. She was indeed a good predator, and due to her smaller size, she could traverse through the forest with relative ease.
After about thirty minutes of walking, she soon stumbled on a small camp of adventurers. It was a sorority of monster hunters, a sisterhood devoted to the survival of humanity versus this harsh environment. All the little ones, about six of them, were sitting around a fire, talking about cute boys back in town, or the best way to use their weapons to slay a beast. Unfortunately for them, they had never seen a living succubus.
All six of the girls were young and beautiful. Two had brown hair, three were blonds, and the last was raven haired. Two carried heavy weapons, ranging from rifles to a rocket launcher; two were more warrior types, while the others were either priestesses or thieves.
Roxanne clapped her hands together, making a loud reverberation that alerted the girls, their eyes shooting up to Roxanne, they were soon getting ready to battle till the succubus used her charm. The big succubus spreads open her wings, posing in a very erotic manner, pumping pheromones into the air. Her wings wafted the strong chemical over to the girls, the smell triggering a primal reaction in the girls, making them blush hotly, and all feeling completely horny. They quickly threw down their weapon and clothes, piling on top of each other in a sudden orgy.
“Oooo! Heheh humans are so easy to manipulate~” She said and smiled, walking over to the six, she slides down on her belly, squishing her hefty breasts into the ground. Her tongue slipped out of her lips and slithered into the pile, the six girls started to hump the gooey muscle and moan loudly. Roxanne could taste the sweet flavor of her meals. The succubus was going to feed on their bodies and sexual energy.
She smiled, coiling her tongue around her first meal like a snack; it was one of the healthy blonds. Rolling her tongue into her mouth like a fruit-roll-up, she slurped the blonde into her mouth. Sealing her lovely lips behind the girl, she rolls the blonde around in her cheeks, coating her in a thick layer of saliva. The wet cavern was big around the poor girl, her mouth absorbing the girl’s taste and energy….it was wonderful. Roxanne put her free hand up to her cheek, her cheek glowing a bright pink as she kept sucking on the girls flavor and power.
“Ahhhh~ How heavenly~ so sweet~ so invigorating! Come to me my darlings~” She said, smiling as the five remaining girls stand at attention before Roxanne.
Heaving her head back she gulps, forcing the small girl down into her hot, narrow throat, the walls pulsating to carry her down to Roxanne’s awaiting belly. Her throat swelled out into a nice, lovely little bulge, the girls outline clearly seen from the outside, only to disappear behind Roxanne’s chest cavity.
“Burp! Mmmm… now who is next?” She asks, fingering over her plump lips as she decided
The girls are unafraid, in fact, Roxanne’s pheromones are so strong that the girls are forever altered to feel only pleasure, and only desire to seek out the greatest way to excite themselves… and there was no better way to excite one’s self by feeding themselves to their mistress.
The five pushed and shoved at one another, each wanting to feed themselves to their mistress, pleading, crying begging to the succubus to eat them.
“Easy my darlings…You’ll get your turn... Mmmn… you!” She said, slithering her tongue around to wrap around the black haired girls waist, reeling into her maw like a fisherman. Licking at her second meal she continues the process, consuming both there energy and body. One by one they took the plunge down into Roxanne’s hungry belly, her pudgy tummy even starting to swell out as the sixth girl fell into her dark belly.
Roxanne’s belly was so soft and warm, the walls pulsating around the meals, rolling them around inside of her belly. The smell was rather terrible, after all this is the place where Rosanne digests all of her meals. The six small bodies were pressed into one another…but they never screamed…they only moaned as their lust continued to control their bodies, all of them eating out each other, fingering one another, climaxing inside of Roxanne’s belly.
The succubus let out another pleased burp, causing the oxygen to leave her belly. Soon the six girls expired even before Roxanne started to digest. Still, meat was locked in her belly and the succubus was eager to use it, acids started to pour into her churning cavern. The disgusting fluid cooked at the girls’ skin, and with the power of Roxanne’s belly it wouldn’t take long for the six to be digested, the acids melting their bodies into a thick nutrient soup. Soon Roxanne’s belly went back to its normal, moderately plump self. But suddenly there was a rustle in the campsite, a seventh girl started to run, not wanting to suffer the same fate as her friends.
The succubus giggled gingerly. “Oh? Hehehe, don’t run! Your friends miss you!” She called out and gave chase, smiling evilly as the girl ran into a heavily wooded area. Roxanne dived forward, whapping her head against the tree-trunks, but it didn’t stop her, sliding out her snake-like tongue to follow out after the running girl.
Roxanne was too busy trying to follow after the meal to notice a sudden large fist come careening from above her tongue to smash it against the ground! It was a violent and startling attack then made Roxanne leap back work to hold her throbbing tongue.
The last human screamed as she was lifted up and swallowed down like nothing. There were two voices, giggling from behind the trees before they slithered out into view. There were two nagas; a teal haired and scaled 75 foot tall naga, and an 80 foot tall orange haired, red scaled naga. Both were quite busty and very fit. The orange hair girl was licking her fingers as she patted her tummy. The two loomed over Roxanne, both giggling malevolently as they looked at each other.
“Hey~ Becky-chan~ Look at this stupid little Bat-thing!” The teal haired naga innocently said.
“No Malon! It’s a Suck-U-Thingy~! Hehe….a short one too! Look at how tiny she is~” The orange haired naga taunted.
“Sucky-thingy? She is a pretty bad hunter to boot!” Malon said with a giggle.
“Yeah….Bitch tried to eat my meal…luckily I stopped her.” Becky said, baring her fist at Roxanne.
Roxanne clenched her tongue, her voice mumbling from her swollen tongue. “Guuh~ No one calls me short~ and why would you strike a demoness? You realize…your both going to die now right?” Roxanne said savagely.
Roxanne often treats her meals with respect…well as much respect as she can give to food…But once someone crosses her, that’s when the fire and hatred of her inner personality erupts.
A deadly sparkle started to shimmer in her eyes. Looking at Becky, she raised her hand, chanting a small hymn, her eyes glowing a bright violet. The two nagas started to giggle, till Becky began to feel a….change…The nagas body began to morph and shrink, her 80 foot tall, 160 foot long body soon shrank down to a mere six feet tall and twelve feet long! This had to be Roxanne’s most favored spells, the ability to shrink or enlarge her prey. This allowed Roxanne to eat as she pleased, and even make normal small girls big enough for her to have sex with, or vice versa to shrink herself!...Oddly she can never make herself grow past 55 feet…
Becky’s head poked out from the grass she squealed. “Ahh! Malon! Kill her!” She shrieked.
The other naga was too shocked to respond. She stood there, frozen as Roxanne smiled happily. Leaning forward she kissed Malon on the lips. It was a rather kind act…but hidden in it was something more sinister. Once Roxanne kissed anyone, it was over for them; just a simple taste of Roxanne’s lips turns the partner into a mindless love zombie. Much like her pheromones, it forever changed the victim to live only for pleasure.
Of course, this always didn’t work on all people. To have the ability to will people around like that is a little over powering. No, if a girl has a particularly high sex drive (Unlike innocent little Malon) the effects are negated. So say if Roxanne were to kiss Vivian or try to use here pheromones on Reiko, neither of them would be affected, since they actively fool around!
“M-m-Malon! Don’t kiss her! Kill her!” Becky screeched like a harpy.
“Mmmmmn~ Malon’s lips taste like candy~” The two giggled in unison. “Now…my little love slave…how about you devour your friend there~” She orders.
Malon was unable to refuse her new mistress. Leaning down she grabbed hold of her former friend and lifted her into the air, stuffing her into her mouth, slurping her in like a long pasta noodle! Becky protested, trying to reason with her former friend, only to be coldly devoured by her. Malon tipped her head back and swallowed, the bulge of the fiery naga was large as it slithered down Malon’s throat. The teal haired naga only smiled as she clasped her hands in front of her chest. Malon’s belly bulged out from the rather large snack, the fellow naga squirming and wiggling around in the stomach for all her worth.
“Did I do good mistress?” She asked in a monotone voice.

part 2

Roxanne rubbed the naga’s cheek, making her moan and blush with delight at the attention from her mistress. “Yes dear…you did perfect~” The succubus said, sliding down onto her knee’s, pressing her sensitive ear to Malon’s gut. “Now digest her, my pet, I want to hear this bitch suffer~”
Malon’s belly bubbled and groaned loudly, the walls visibly swelling as Becky beat against the stomach walls. But it was too late, and she was too small and weak to escape. She was doomed, and after a few minutes in that stomach, her muffled screaming soon went silent as the meal churned her up!
The succubus giggled, sliding up she kissed the naga passionately, her prehensile tongue sliding deep into Malon’s mouth. The naga sucked on it eagerly. The two immediately began to coil and hug each other, embracing one another in a love filled haze. The two’s hands began to explore their bodies, soft fingers sliding over plump rears and padded breasts. The naga smiled, slithering her tail over to probe it against Roxanne’s nethers. The Succubus moaned loudly, the thick girth of Malon’s tail sliding into her hot nethers, stretching open her labia.
Roxanne returned the favor to her lovely pet, slithering her slender, spade pointed tail up into Malon’s warm pussy. Her left hand rubbed at Malon’s engorged clit as their kissing grew tighter and they enjoyed their own ecstatic sex. Molan’s hands slid over Roxanne’s curvaceous rump, kneading the soft rear around. Roxanne gasped and smiled.
“Oooo You naughty little naga~” She teased and smiled, leaning back. “Mmmm…You know…you look quite appetizing my pet~” She said and grinned.
Malon smiled. “Please, Mistress….devour me…I live only to serve your every desires….”
Roxanne smiled, asking a question she always enjoyed asking her prey, even when she knew she would receive the same answer! “If prey hunts prey, and predators hunt prey…who hunts the predator?” She asked.
Malon smiled brightly, watching as Roxanne’s mouth stretched in front of her face. The moist mouth was pink and drool covered, her dark passage like throat pulsated, awaiting the first swallow of delicious naga flesh.
“You do mistress…you hunt the predators!” She said…then her vision was cast into darkness.
Roxanne’s gulp was effortless and quick, her dislocated jaw easily stretching to encompass the girls head. Her tongue licking and slurping, the sheer length of her tongue made it possible to lick her face and neck all at once, allowing her to experience all of Malon’s sweet taste.
Malon’s body soon began to shine a bright pink as her sexual energy was being completely consumed along with her body! Roxanne’s body flushed, she murmured heavily, her pussy dribbling as she felt all of Malon’s pleasure add to her own, plus that naga’s tail still wiggling in her pussy felt amazing!
With a powerful gulp, Roxanne slurped in Malon’s head, sliding her head down into her tight, hot throat, the walls wrapping around her face, giving a ghostly outline seen from the outside, the belly have indents where the naga’s eye-sockets and opened mouth were. The Succubus was eagerly swallowing, slurping over her shoulders, then large breasts, her tongue licking and lapping at those lovely breasts, the hefty padding from the naga’s diet made Roxanne’s taste buds tingling.
Soon her lips were working down over Malon’s belly, eagerly pushing the girls head down into her tight, empty, humid stomach, the walls reeking of acids and predigested humans…yet it didn’t bother Malon. The naga only kept wiggling her tail in her mistress, soon prompting Roxanne to orgasm, her juices exploding over the naga’s tail. Roxanne returned the favor, her tongue slipping into Malon’s pussy even before she swallowed over that supple rear, her tongue licking and slurping deep inside of the girl’s vagina!
Malon cooed and wiggled, moaning and shivering as she was teased. Her orgasm was building up in her body. Roxanne could feel it, that pleasure building up inside of Malon, she felt it all, she could taste it all…she was enraptured by this delicious little meal. Her tongue grazed the naga’s clit, increasing Malon’s pleasure until she erupts, her juices gushing out form her nethers, her tongue spooning out all of that sweet juice. The flavor was great, and it made Roxanne smile as all that pleasure she created became life sustaining energy for herself. Slurping and heaving, Roxanne worked this big, strong tail deeper into her maw, swallowing it as if it were a huge noodle!
All 140 feet of the tail was swallowed down, the juice covered tail was Roxanne’s favorite, and she enjoyed the taste of her own flavor. Her won pussy juice clung to her lips, licking the pert lips clean she looked down as her stomach swelled out into a massive dome. The belly was a gigantic, the naga’s outline seen outside of the belly, all the different bulges were the various coils of that long tail. Her gut dragged across the ground, but Roxanne didn’t care. Her hands just kept rubbing and petting her full stomach, the walls churning around her meal.
“Mmmmmn BUUUUURRRRPP! What a delicious little naga you were…too bad you won’t even rest the last of the day!” She said, cackling playfully.
The naga only smiled. “So long as you are fed, mistress…”
Roxanna giggled ominously. Her belly was too large and heavy for even her to manage, resting atop of her large belly she sighed, leaning against it as if it were a bed. Sighing heavily she hiccupped one last time before dozing off to sleep…she would need to try and nap this huge meal off!
Once Roxanne was asleep, her belly went to work, the walls churning and depositing plenty of acids into the stomach to try and break down such a big and tough meal. Naga’s were tough, and their scales were incredibly durable, it would take a few hours maybe even a day or two for even Roxanne’s stomach to deal with! The belly bubbled and moved around in all directions as Malon wiggled, the naga didn’t scream however, but the feeling of her body slowly being burned at did indeed feel uncomfortable! The naga moaned till she passed out from lack of oxygen. Roxanne’s belly churns and bubbles loudly, sending echoing groans through out the forest. Various Jaykay birds flew away from the crude churning noise that Roxanne’s belly made as she digested her gigantic meal.

It was six hours later that Roxanne opened her eyes to realize it was dark out, blinking she reached up to rub her eyes, looking around she blinked as she was somewhat closer to the earth. Sliding back onto her feet she blinked. Her belly was no longer touching the ground, but it was still huge, as if she was nine months pregnant with twenty big babies! Placing her hands on her gut she rubbed and kneaded the soft flesh. There wasn’t as much weight in her belly, her digestion has paid off, and the stomach had broken down most of Malon, turning a good portion of the naga into a nutrient soup, sighing heavily the succubus giggled.
“Mmmmn naga’s are such good preds…but they make such good meals~.” She said with a bright blush, playfully putting her finger to her lips in a sexy pose, almost flaunting to you readers =3.
Starting to walk she eeped as her whole center of gravity was thrown off because of her large belly, walking ungracefully along through the forest, walking over to her secret lair, a smile stretched across her lips.
She moved through the Chidokai, her sheer girth from the belly causing her steps to quake the earth. Walking around, she blinked as she heard a thunderclap race across the sky. She reached up to scratch her cheek. “Wow…it’s already gonna rain~ I thought the season was over!” She sighed heavily, starting to increase her pace, trying to avoid knocking herself over.
Rain began rushing down from the sky. Causing the foliage to ripple as endless beads of rain battered them. Roxanne groaned, moving with this big belly was difficult, having to kick her stomach along so she could get over to her desired location.
She sighed in relief…there it was; her home!
The distance, amidst a rocky hill and forest, there was a stone opening. Moss and lichen had grown over it, various vines shielding it from the view of many. Walking over to it she parted the vines and stepped into the cold, dark crypt. Descending the stairs she smiled happily, her spade tail flicking around behind her. As she descended deeper, she must have gone down two hundred giant steps to reach the bottom. A huge antechamber was revealed. All around were statues or broken pillars. The statues depicted various demons and succubi. This used to be a heretics lair, a place where all hell worshippers could come to live in sin and debauchery.
Sadly its days of glory and pleasure have been lost to the ages, and now it just serves as Roxanne’s den… no one remembers this forgotten under lair. Here Roxanne was safe… not that she was ever in danger… but if any other succubi or vengeful creatures came back to haunt her, she knew here was her safe haven.
She looked at various torches set up at the wall, then pointed to them with her pointer and middle finger. A swirling fire began to generate from her fingers, and soon a molten jet fired out. The flame ignited the thatch, causing them to burn brightly. The light caused shadows to dance away in this dank chamber. The entire chamber was carved by hand, each cold stone placed carefully…it definitely looked like it was made beyond human hands.
Roxanne loved all kinds of magic; she was very adept in seduction, size changing and fire magics. She even dabbled in learning some ice magic from other succubi. Some other favorite magic’s of hers were lightning and shape shifting, she wasn’t particularly adept with these, but she attempts them no less!
Smiling Roxanne looked over at a bed in the distance. It was rather amazing to see a fully furnished and well kept bed in this drab place. Roxanne stole the bed from a previous meal, a tasty little princess, growing the bed with her magic she managed to even find purple bed spreads to use. Piles of gold and treasure were amassed around the bed posts. Roxanne was rather proud of her collection, she had taken it from merchant caravans and from the countless people she swallows! Occasionally she would shape herself into a human and go to Negav to have herself a little shopping spree!
She didn’t only just receive gold by taking it from meals. Roxanne loved to explore! That’s how she found this building after all. She enjoys walking all around Felarya, trying to find secret caverns or forgotten temples, plundering anything that she found and liked. Sometimes she would even find various monsters down in the underworld of Felarya, and she always enjoyed to best said creatures.
Roxanne truly loved living in Felarya, it’s so…normal here…so much nicer and relaxed then living in hell.
Walking over to her bed, she pulled the sheets back and laid down, deciding not to cover herself tonight, rubbing at her large, growling stomach she sighed, she would sleep off Malon then maybe leave to go find Vivian or Crisis…those naga’s were always fun to meet (Meet! Not eat x3). Rubbing her large stomach, she smiled as the various shapes that her belly once had were all gone, now it was just a solid dome. She giggled. ‘Sleep hell my pets.” She said with a laugh before closing her eyes, falling asleep in her torch-lit lair.
Her silent form lay on her bed, the belly bubbling loudly. Her hair lying against the pillow…indeed this succubus was gorgeous in what ever situation she was in…

The End

wow...Just frigin wow....

I idolize you Reiko.

Warrior3000 wrote:

wow...Just frigin wow....

I idolize you Reiko.

8Reiko blushes and feels embarrassed. "Aww thank you so much~"

I didn't like it.

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/Fish/ wrote:

I didn't like it.

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Lol...you little trickster!!

Hehe. You just reminded me why I love reading your stories.

and you reminded me of why I feel pathetic compared to the works of other writers....

Absolutely fantastic, really.

Warrior is right, you're making us all feel rather pathetic... I was gonna submit an entry, but I shouldn't bother. Meh, I will anyways, because, well, it's actually about time I do a story with some actual vore in it. Anyone who's read the two (very short) chapters of my story knows I haven't done that yet... but I have such great descriptions in my head...

But anyways, great work, great work.

very good job, I've read the story one time, and the next night I've dreamed about it (very strange), I really enjoy it (the story and the dream)
well done.

another excelent peice of writing

WOW that was..... AWESOME I suddenly feel like I don't stand a chance XD still gonna enter of course but wow, great job Reiko! That story was lesbiantastic! *cheers*

This story w@s fre@cking @WSOME.m@kes my storys look like shit comp@red to yours Reiko.

ZionAtriedes wrote:

Absolutely fantastic, really.

Warrior is right, you're making us all feel rather pathetic... I was gonna submit an entry, but I shouldn't bother. Meh, I will anyways, because, well, it's actually about time I do a story with some actual vore in it. Anyone who's read the two (very short) chapters of my story knows I haven't done that yet... but I have such great descriptions in my head...

But anyways, great work, great work.

AHH No still post it! T___T Its not my intention to put anyone to shame~ It should still be fun to write and post!

Atlas wrote:

very good job, I've read the story one time, and the next night I've dreamed about it (very strange), I really enjoy it (the story and the dream)
well done.

And did you really? Thats pretty cool! ^__^