- L'Ryn wrote:
- Wow... but uh, Karbo doesn't really want any of the Guardians really delved into. They kinda aren't really characters but reasons as to why Felarya is still wild and free...
but I don't know what I'm talking about TT-TT *hides in cornor*
I didnt really add any more information than Karbo watch:
Attribute: "Mercreti info" , "Cor info"
Gender and Apparent Age: "A normal looking young girl (10 - 12)" , "A normal looking young man (18 - 22)"
Powers and Abilitys: "whose magic can obliterate entire worlds." , "He is invulnerable and immortal yet unlike his sister he is has no magic, COR is also very dimensionally stable,"
Apperance: "She can change her appearance at will " , "whose appearance is as standard as one can be, brown hair, average height and an athletic build "
Home Location: "and is believed to have often walked anonymously in some of the human cities on Felarya" , "He stays clear of most human cities, preferring to roam the forests of Felarya living in various cottages, tree houses, bunkers, ruins and the occasional dungeon scattered across the land."
Occupational Tendances: "and even had jobs there" , "Occasionally he will use these abilities to take up a job as a courier or messenger in order pay for something and will work for any race"
Telling Feature: "The only thing that never changes, which can reveal her true nature, is her eyes. No matter what she looks like, she has the eyes of a very, very ancient being. " , "the only thing unique about his looks is his blue eyes which gleam with an insight and intelligence beyond that of human understanding."
The Reason it looks So long is because of 3 things:
1. I'm long winded. For instance i didd't need that bit at the end "be they Humans or Harpies, Nekos or"ect I also didn't need the simily "like a stitch of thread closing a rip in the fabric of space"
2. Dimentionally stable. We all know felarya is dimentionally unstable but nothing has ever been described as very dimentionally stable before and i wanted to make clear what this means and what abilitys it results in.
3. brother of Mercreti. I added that bit about being her brother for the sake of the balence of power because despite being able to destroy thing with magic and living forever she is still under powered in comparison to the other gaurdians. the idea was that if ther was only one human gaurdian he or she would have ended up with both Mercreti's and Cor's powers but because there are two the power and abilities are divided between the two.
Without these things it could look like:
COR
Race: Human
Threat: Moderate
His apperence is that of A normal looking young man (18 - 22) with brown hair, an average height and athletic build the only thing unique about his looks is his blue eyes which gleam with an insight and intelligence beyond that of human understanding. He stays clear of most human cities, preferring to roam the forests of Felarya living in various dwellings across the land. He is invulnerable and immortal. COR is also very dimensionally stable,Letting him open 2-way portls at will. Occasionally he will use these abilities to take up a job as a courier or messenger in order pay for something and will work for any race.