Annette(Naga) my first character

Appearance: She look like a regular Naga except the snake half is can change colors. She is 80 feet long and 35 feet tall. She very beutiful.
skin color/scale color:she has a light tan on her top half while her tail and scales are green with a bright red strip going down the middle of it.
hair color: her hair is long and it is light brown
eye color: one of her eyes is brown the other is two color at once one half of the eye is blue and the other is green.
Age:25

Behavior:She acts childish sometimes and other times she doesnt. She is neutral and her diet consists of fruits and berries and small animals. If a human harms her physically or mentally She will eat the human. In rare cases she eats humans when she is starving. She may also eat humans for no reason in some case.
If she does get a hold of a human she will give the human a chance to give her a reason why she should no eat it if the reason is good she will let the human go if she sees the human again she will not give it a chance. If the reason is bad well you know. If she chooses to eat the human it will play with eat, mostly she will put it in her mouth and then take it out and keep doing that.

skills:She was born with all her abilities. Since She Lives outside of Negav she does her hunting there. Camouflage.She has a very sticky tongue which is used to get her prey faster. If she is extremely hungry she has they ability to go inside any mans mind with in 10 miles who is asleep she will then tell then man to come to her and when there she will try to seduce the man by kissing him which injects a venom into him which causes him to to fall in love with her making him easy to eat (she only does this if she sees that going inside the mans mind is not enough). Since they are not as cruel as most other Naga sometimes they will stop the stomach acids from flowing and simply drain the prey of its energy while it sits in the stomach this is completely painless and eventually the prey falls into a deep sleep and the the Naga will release the stomach acids to digest the prey, they will only do this if they prey is not rude in any way and does not try to attack it while in the stomach. The can also release they prey if it chooses by simply making the stomach push out the victim and then it will spit it out on its hand and place it on the ground (more in the personality section)
She also has a magic-prof stomach to stop mages from teleporting (the teleporting ability is very difficult ability and can only be done ability to master and can only be
done if the person knows the complex Innate magic) out.

personality:She can be very nice or extremely cruel if she chooses to eat a human and the human is not cruel it may release it after absorbing some of its energy, if the prey is cruel she will not release it and digest it in a slow and painful way. She can be provoked if attacked or insulted but if treated with respect she will might be friendly and let you go on your way.

Hunting methods: She is fairly voracious As mentioned in the skills section she will make a man come toher and seduce him.She sometimes also use disguise them selves as the background and simply catch the prey with her sticky tongue. She will also lay down on forest floor and if she can catch prey with her hands then she will get it and and gulp it down. If no humans are available or she is in a nice mood she will eat fruits and some of the wild beast. She also dislikes the taste of Neko's

Backstory: Annette was born near the born near the Giant Tree. When she was just born she was about one foot long and weighed less than a pound during a windy day she was blown away from her parents and landed outside of Negav and it is unknown what happened to her parents .
she ate fruit that fell from the trees until she meet a nameless fairy who shrunk humans down and fed them to her untill she grew to her full size she did not know how to hunt . The until she meet a old naga who taught her how to hunt and she became a pro at it. Sadly her mentor passed a year later and because of this she will let somebody go if the lost some one dear to them though but only works if it was a recent occurrence . She knows that she may never see her parents again albeit she doesn't really mind it as her memories are not good ones.

Likes/Dislikes: She hates rudeness and people who are arent kindhearted if you fall into that category you have no chance of escape and she will eat you with out hesitation. She loves people who have a good heart and those who show sympathy and she likes people with a good singing voice this will help you alot if you want to stay alive. She dislikes the taste of Nekos as mentioned before. She also loves to eat mages because when she absorbs energy from her prey if she chooses to she says mage energy tastes the best. She also hates people who are arrogant and only care about themselves. She hates liars more than anything.

locations:She lives right outside of Negav and sometimes travel through the forests to get outside of Neko Village some times travel to other parts of Felarya by forest.

Please leave me feedback

You haven't given us any personality beyond her hunting habits, nor have you provided a backstory or...... really, anything but how she handles her prey. If you're writing a one-shot hentai, there's no problem. But if you want a character you can write about on more than one occasion and that people will care about, you're gonna have to give us a LOT more information. What's she like? What does she like or dislike? Does she have any quirks? Has anything interesting happened to her in her lifetime? You know, all of it.

Yeah, I agree with Gregole, this bio needs some work. I mean, it doesn't have her height, hait colour, or even her name till some of the later paragraphs. It's also a little confusing, as at the start of the bio it says she only eats humans if they upset her or if she's starving, but later on it suggests she's a much more active hunter of humanoids.

Sorry to have to say this, but your character needs more information. At the moment, it's nothing but bare bones.