Your characters?

Atlas wrote:

Well , there is my first and only character for the moment:

Name: Atlas
Race: Human
Kingdom: Nomer
Clan/village: Bontria
Age: 20
Sex: Male
Height: 1m90
Hair colour: Dark brown
Eyes: Green
Skin: A little bit pale
Clothes: dark brown suit, light armour and a dark green cap. He is equipped with a brown belt with some pockets, dark green trousers, boots that almost come to the knees and a pair of brown gloves with a blue gem lodged in the center of the left glove.

Nomer: Nomer is a very powerful kingdom. There, the magic is something common for all people, some villages are specialises in pyre spell, another in ice, wind, etc… But one is know as the multi element Clan, the village of Bontria.

History: Born in the prosperous village of Bontria, Atlas has a very powerful magic and manage all kind of elements for his spells. At the age of 14, Bontria suffer a surprise attack from the kingdom of Morleig, who kills all the inhabitants, unable to defend alone against that army. Fortunately, Atlas managed to escape thanks to a magic cap,
Who make him camouflage in the environment, wearing with him a very powerful gem.
After that, Atlas decides to join the Nomer’s army and quickly, become a high ranked captain.

Skills: Being a Bontrian, Atlas possesses a great magic power. He always wears a magic cap with him, who makes him invisible for the enemy eyes (he must cover his whole body to be sure it works) and a powerful gem, allowing him to absorb the magic in the environment, store it, and give a better control of it. The practices he has done with the gem make him able to create a new method of using spells. Thanks to it, Atlas developed the faculty to manipulate the magic and use her as a weapon, concentrating it in the shape of bow and arrows to attack. (The advantage of this was the ability to throw the magic much more fast, far and concentrated than in a normal spell) and sure, give the element effect he want.
Because in the army it is necessary to pass a survival test, Atlas knows the bases of survive in nature, and have a great endurance.
(he generally wear a light sword just in case)

Atlas is a proud and serious character, but has also the habit of being nice and chivalrous. He has a strong sense of justice and has a tendency to not use lethal force in battle unless thoroughly provoked, especially if he can win without doing so. Instead, he will simply incapacitate his opponent. He is also very tolerant and respect most of the advice of the others.


(i've done a introductive story about him and how he arrived in Felarya, I'm translating it to english for the moment )

Well, it is my first attempt of drawing my character and of colorisation with photoshop. Sure, I am not a great artist like some people here, but I would like to know your opinion or advices about this one. (I didn't make some details because at the beginning it was only a "try")



So, with a little practice, do you think I would be a good "draftsman"?
or ...


(sorry for the the big picture XD)

Name: Mica
Race: Neko
Hair/Fur: Black
Tribe: Scorching Claws
Gender: Female
Skin: White
Eyes: Green
Clothes: I'm working on that.
Height: 6'
Home: Great Rocky Fields. Duh.

Mica is a neko living with the Scorching Claws Tribe. Her job consists of finding humans in the Misty Glade, east of her home. She has a great sense of direction, which is why she was entrusted with this job in the first place. She prefers to find her prey before going into the mist, since she has never liked it and all of the strange ways that it changes. Her usual prey consist of foolish humans trying to find Milkadis temple, since they make easy prey...at least until they go inside. Mica has never followed a human inside the Milkadis temple, for obvious reasons.

Mica enjoys the thrill of chasing down a human and pouncing to send him/her to the ground, listening to their curses when they are caught, but hates listening to them go on and on, trying to reason with her or threaten her into letting them go. This has lead her to stereotype humans as talkative, annoying creatures. Every. Single. One. Once has her prey on the ground, she then ties their hands together with makeshift rope so they won't be able to struggle as much.

When Mica is navigating the Great Rocky Fields, usually going to or from the Misty Glade, she will use her stave to climb up on top of the rocks to save time, so she can go over them instead of around them. This also decreases her risk of being found by ground-based predators, but she will be easily sighted by airborne predators. She is willing to take the risk, as she knows her fire-stave would prove more useful in a harpy attack than, say, a centaur attack. If she has a prisoner this takes longer, however, since she will have to climb down from one rock, up to the next rock, rinse, lather, repeat. Luckily, if she doesn't have a prisoner with her, she can simply get a running start, then jump from rock to rock, and be across the fields in half an hour.

Mica is very fast, agile, and of course, balanced. A lot of this has come naturally from being a neko, but a lot of her skills have developed with practice, hunting humans, chasing them down, or for humans more aware of their surroundings, following them through discrete routes, such as following them through the trees above. This doesn't happen much, though, since most of her hunting is done in the Misty Glade where she can simply get behind her prey, pounce, then tie them up.

It is rumored that Mica is the hunter that brought in a human with great magical power, which managed to narrowly escape the camp before being eaten by a harpy.

My first coloring attempt on Mica, and come to think of it, my first coloring attempt on gimp. Ever.

Hey, Didn't I write this somewhere before?

Normal Text: Upon entry to Felarya
This Color Text: After some time, up to his death

Name: Jacob Shaeder
Age: 23 56
Height: 5’7” 5'10"
Race/Species: Human
Place in the food Chain: Prey
Physical appearance: Jacob has the look of a man who cares very little for class or beauty. His black hair hangs greasily from his head with no real style, while his facial hair is often between stubble and unkempt. Several scars are scattered around his body, ranging in origin from actual combat (Such as the long mark along his chest) to lashings for crimes in his earlier realm. Beyond such blemishes, his body is in a a good condition considering his origin. After escaping from the Ascalarin mines, Jacob quickly began to improve in health until almost at the prime of a normal man's abilities. Similarly, the vitality flowing into him allowed him to grow much more properly than his old diet allowed.
Attire: Jacob’s clothing is simple, often just a commoners shirt and vest along with pants, while his ‘shoes’ are worn and drab. There is a small sheath in his left boot for a concealed knife. There is also a pair of sheathes under each arm, while a combat dagger was strapped to one side and a sword sheath is comfortably placed along his other. Jacob would also clean up his appearance if a good job required it, but except for such occasions he rarely dressed fancily and even then the 'class' never lasted for long.
Friends: Beyond the few fellow 'work mates' of his, Jacob has no real friends upon his entry to Felarya. Over time this changed as he gained the trust of those working with him (and gave his own in turn), so as to eventually include a tightly knit network of communication between several dozen figures in assorted cities.
Magic: Jacob has no magical skills whatsoever. Even if offered training in such methods, he would refuse due to (what he believes as) the fickle nature of magic.
Skills: Jacob has learned quite a few skills to survive as the scum-bag he is. First and foremost, he has learned quite a bit in the art of hand-to-hand (And, namely, how to fight dirty in it). While in an honest match he isn’t a great threat to anyone better trained than the average guard or soldier, Jacob has a knack for quickly turning an honest fight into an unbalanced one. After some time on Felarya his skill had improved with a blade, though he was still a poor fighter compared to many and preferred to fight dirty as much as before.

Along with his dirty tricks, Jacob has acquired some skills that suit his old lifestyle as a thief. Among many of these skills is a ‘cant’ that he use to use when communicating among fellow thieves on his home world (Will be made up as I go along in RP’s [With attempts to remain consistent], while most people outside the guilds and not focused on intelligence should NOT be able to go “‘Thorn’. Hm, one of us must be posing a problem to him, and be targeted by him and his cronies. Better keep an eye on him…”. ) After arriving in Felarya and earning some freedom, he continued to use the cant to help secure messages between allies.

Similarly, Jacob is somewhat proficient with many skills one would need to work as a thief. With a 'pick and time, Jacob could work to remove a lock of non-magical origin. If not encumbered, he could 'slip' something out of a passer-by’s pocket and slip it into his own. He also knows how to make crude traps to injure or disable opponents. Similar to his swordplay, these skills also improved to a better level over time.

((Updated this somewhat))

I've only wirtten a single short story, but here the character out of it. I prefer Roleplay over story writing.

Name: Ha'dara
Age: 190
Gender: Male
Species: Genki Naga
Hair: Deep Gold, spiked upward with two bangs hanging over the forehead
Eyes: Light Emerald
Scales: Gold, Orange
Diet: Vegetarian (unless very desperate)
Height (head to floor): 100’
Weight: Unknown (have you tried to weight a 100 foot tall Naga?)
Status: Single
Element: Life energy
Description: Average skin tone, not very muscular
Hobbies: Sleeping, watching smaller races
Personal Quote: "Now I'm almost ashamed of what I am!"
Name Meaning: Home of light (Bajoran)

Powers: In his world of origin, Naga's don't use magic, instead they have the ability to harness their life-force, giving him the ability to fire a beam of energy from his mouth, nothing else is known due to an unconfrontational and isolated nature though he claims to be one of the most powerful of his world.

Personality: Generally distant and slow to anger but can confrontational when he is annoyed. He can be aggressive when seriously irritated. Unlike many Naga's he see's the smaller races all as people and not food, prefering a vegetarian diet. He often can be found talking to passing explorers and isn't fond of pointless suffering, especially when it is cause by the comon opinion of humans and other little people. He is not the type to charge blindly into a fight with others and will attempt to stay away from others to learn about them. He will almost always stay away from Felaryan Naga's, viewing them as little more than sadistic animals.

History: He always got along well with Humans due to his homeworld. His original home, called Ha'mara, was famous throughout many worlds for its peaceful environment, home to a large Human civilisation and a sizable colony of Giant Naga's who channel life energy instead of magic, among other races. As all races on that world co-existed peacefully, Ha'dara views the inhabitants of Felarya as savages and attempts to have as little to do with them as possible after stumbling into Felarya. Shortly after arriving in Felarya, he protected a human explorer from a young Naga, demonstrating his energy abilities, while returning her to the rest of her group (making a few friends in Felarya). He also saw Crisis and Anna, though they didn't see him.

Relationships:
Best Friend: Be'pu' (a human girl living in Ha'mara)
Girlfriend: None
Felarya Friends:

1. Harriet Onus and her exploration group (Human explorers, made by me)

Attacks:
Energy manipulation
Like all Naga's from his homeworld, he can manipulate his life energy into a large blast from the mouth. It is unknown if he can do anything else.

Clothes :
Main: A deep golden-colored, short sleeved shirt with a large symbol of a blue Naga curled around a red dagger on the back
Misc: A gold medallion hanging on a gold chain of a Naga curled into an O shape with a human standing inside the hole

As a Predator:Due to his upbringing and past environment, he will not eat any other living thing, unless they are already dead at the time or evil (child-molesters, murderers, ect). He hates being considered a predator.

Name: Rattla
Species: Naga(Rattle Naga;Supposed last species)
Sex: Female
Eyes: Black Slitted Pupils with sand-colored irises.
Hair: Dark Brown.
Scales: Sand-Colored with Brown Diamond pattern on the back.
Length: (Head to Tail)90'
Age: ?

Powers: One of Rattla's main abilities is that she has poisonous fangs that can be hidden or revealed at anytime.Her vision is very different from other Nagas.Her eyes are like heat seeking goggles, able to pick out prey from a hiding spot with ease, making her a succesful hunter.

Her movement and speed is also a factor in hunting.She can do a movemnt called "sidewinding", in which she zig-zags her body sideways across the sand, which actually lifts her body off the ground and propels her at high speeds.She can burrow through the sand like a mermaid swimming through water.Her favorite tactic on small prey is to lie on her back and cover herself with sand, leaving her tail rattle uncovered.When humans or Desert Nekos, go to investigate, the rattle will "crawl away" toward where Rattla's mouth is.Hypnotized by the rattling tail, they will follow the tail torwards the hidden mouth, until she opens her mouth.The sand beneath her prey disappears, revealing her drooling open mouth.The rattle also serves as a warning to rival predators.In the jungle, she cannot sidewind, so she uses a different method.She lifts her tail into the air, and runs on her hands, and when she picks up enough speed, she can relax her tail, and the wind will keep it aloft, that way it doesn't drag against the ground while she runs after prey.

Story: Raised by the scavenging Chupacabras, Rattla is a very uniqe Naga.She is believed to be the last of a race of giant prehistoric Nagas called Rattle Nagas, decendants of present day Nagas.And unlike other Nagas, she doesn't exactly vore every meal.In fact, because of her Chupacabra upbringing, she will feed of dead creature, from fresh kill to old rotting meat.Her motto is "A dead body in the desert/jungle isn't ignored for long."But she is more then willing to go after live prey.She is a sleek and deadly predator, and rarely gives up the hunt.She lives in a small desert in Felaryan called the Aridian Desert, co-existing with Chupacabras and Felaryan Geckoros, and rivals the other dominant predator, the Xorpions.

She can be very tomboyish and playful, and would love to be involved with almost anything Crisis does.She can't tolerate Anna, and most of you should know why.She usually has a Western accent, though she usually drops the accent when she is talking to her about-to-be-swallowed prey.When angered, she is fight-prone, once even attacking Anna, for reasons best unknown...

Also, Rattla's name is pronounced Rat-Luh, which is meant to sound like Rattler.

For the very last time I hope. Hilary's profile.

http://shady-knight.deviantart.com/art/Hilary-Profile-92971473

Even though I haven't finished my story yet here are my two main characters from Adventures of Amy and Ruby

Ruby
Race: Pheonix Harpie
Gender: Female
Age: 59
Appearance: 19
Hieght: 70'
Weight: If your brave enough or dumb enough to ask a Giant Harpie her weight then be my guest
Hair: Red
feathers: red and yellow

Powers: Ruby is able to set her feathers on fire for defence, able to breath Fire, Tears have powerful healing properties.

Personality: Ruby is very Kind and often thinks of her friends, She tends to be a little obliviouse and has a short attention span. She can be voraciouse at time's but is sort of picky about what or who she eats, She will not eat children or thier parents under any sercomstances even if she is starving, She also seem's to not want to eat anything that is cute, this means if she thinks your hair or something you are wearing is cute you have about a 90% chance of falling out of the food catagorie. Ruby loves to have fun and is often seen trying to get her friends to play games with her, or playing pranks on people. One thing about Ruby though is that she has a very short temper under her childish apperance, Ruby mostly looses her temper when she see's her friends in danger or if she see's a child in danger. When she gets angry she can be very terrifiying as she set's all of her feathers on fire and often continuesly burns the offender even after they have been dead for a long time, Her fire's are unusually hot depending on how angry she was, in some cases places on the ground turned to glass because of the heat. As for Haprie language Ruby olny seem's to talk like a Harpie when she is around other harpies, If she isn't around them she talks like a normal person. When other races talk to Ruby in harpie Language ruby most of the time doesn't realise that they are simply tring to talk to her in harpie language and not just insulting her this often hurts her feelings as she thinks that they really are insulting her.

History: Ruby was raised in a giant research lab on another planet and doesn't remember where she came from. her earliest memory was being alone in a field when she was just a baby with no one else around then some people came and took her to the lab.

Best Friend: Amy

Amy
Race: Neko (she was going to be human but i changed it)
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Hieght: 6'
wieght: even if she isn't a giant harpie I am still not asking
Hair: White with black tips on her ears

Abilities: Amy is very smart and thinks alot of things threw, she carries a lot of servival gear with her, probably her best weapon is a grenade launcher that fires mace grenades

Personality: Amy is a seriouse person and will not act without thinking something threw, Amy love Alchohol and is often seen drinking, she doesn't seem to get drunk often but when she does nothing she say's makes any sence. She loves to discover new things and write about them in her journal and take pictures of them. One bad thing about Amy is that if she finds herself in a situation that she can't think a way out of she often panicks and does something stupid. For the most part Amy eat's fruit but sence she came to felarya she has started eating Neeras, she doesn't admit to doing it and often feels guilty after she eats them but she just can't stop she just loves them too much like an adiction.

history: Amy was a field researcher on her home planet and was working at the Aviary where she meet Ruby. amy became good friends with Ruby. it was Amy who finally got Ruby out of the Aviary.

Best Friend: Ruby

Edit: I've made some changes to Amy

ooooo me characters ay.... ah well hell ill just use one of dem not wanting to do all of dem it would be a very long post and de one i choose is MIKE. YAY!!!!

Name: Mike
gender: male
Race: Human dragon half breed
Age: 17
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 145(he is skinny because hes a half breed
Hair: short brown hair
Eyes: blueish green
Marks: a curse mark on his right hand
Scales: black & red
clothing: a large straw cowboy hat, a black sleeveless shirt, a green button up shirt that he wears as a jacket, green short pants, and a pair of sneakers.
weapons: SHIRASAYA samurai sword and a 1873 revolver
mecha: Hell Dragon Gundam

personality: he is thick headed sometimes; sociable; somewhat funny; likes to make people feel better; he has a nack of avoiding trouble; hes is very smart and care free.

interest: he likes to play video games,draw, read(sometimes political stuff), and sword fighting with Claire. he likes working on his gundam which he decided to buld and named it Hell Dragon Gundam (no idea why he built it). he also likes to play pranks on Claire and his sister.

history: was an average person until he discovered that he was half breed when he was 14 by waking up one morning finding that he had wings, a tail, two sharp fangs, and cats eyes; he also notice that his ears changed and looked like cat ears but with scales on them. his parents told him that he has four spirits living inside his boy. the spirit of the queen of the dragon half breed race; the spirit of the king of the ancients and dark ancients; and the spirit of the hell dragon. he was sent to china to a secret temple to help him understand and control his powers but a certain incedent happened and well...his 'true form' came out and tried to kill is ex-friend named marren who betrayed mike. one year passed, mike experiance his first dimesional trip to alegasia and found his dragon partner Claire who hatched for him. they trained with the elves for nine years(two months passed on earth will Mike and claire were in alegasia). Mike taught how claire to turn into a human form to live with him. one day mike chanted a spell and suddenly a rift opened and it was his chance to go home; he told claire to come with him and she agreed. two years passed after mike and claire came back to earth but on a sunday morning mike went for a walk and expeirenced his second dimensional trip. this time mike lands in felarya and begins a new journy.

powers: combination of dragon and ancient magic(it does not make him uber powerful). he can use many spells just by thought but when his darkerself (true form) takes over, his power increases enough to challenge four titans at once. however, if his curse mark/seal is opened, the spirit of helltara(the hell dragon) comes out and takes control and goes on a blood lust rampage and kills everything that attacks it or run in fear of it. he can control every element even sub-elements.

abilities: he can fly and breath underwater. he somehow gain the ability to be immune to stomach acid(maybe because hes an ancient>_>). he can fight with his sword with lighting fast reflexes. he can shoot a target from 200 ft away. he also has many strange abilities that even i cant describe.

best friends: Miiko, Mireille, crisis and anna( dont ask how he became thier frind), Anko(dont know the reasons yet), and a fairy named rena who somehow lost all of her memory except for her name.

if you think mike is uber strong just tell if he is. i think this sums up my character.

Goldclaw wrote:

Height: 5'12"

12" equal a foot. May want to fix that.

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he discovered that he was half breed when he was 14
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one year passed,
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nine years(two months passed on earth will Mike and claire were in alegasia).
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two years passed

He'd be 26, not 17, if he was in the realm that had two years pass. The temporal distortion would not slow his age unless he spent those nine years training with his bodily functions only working for a two-month period. This shouldn't matter much, though, as Half-Dragons have silly-long lives and he's also on a Planet where aging is moot until a certain point.

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he can use many spells just by thought

Which type of spell, and one must also consider what one considers uber powerful. One may see a Fireball capable of reducing a man to cinders at will powerful, another might consider it nothing and start citing reasons why such as Magic / Fire resistance, dodging the fireball, Pre-Cog to dodge the aim, etc.

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but when his darkerself (true form) takes over, his power increases enough to challenge four titans at once.

Though I do think most people will find the power to challenge Four Giant-Beings at once a bit much.

The control of every element and sub-element is also seemingly a bit much. We're speaking an elementalist who can cast whatever they want at once.

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he can shoot a target from 200 ft away.

How long to aim are we talking here? Are we speaking take time to aim, steady himself, fire, etc? Or something like Shoot 'em Up Smith who'll be shooting the swirling rails on a tilt-a-whirl, had something like a 70% accuracy rate while descending a stairwell on a rope and twirling around to shoot those rising, etc?

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if you think mike is uber strong just tell if he is. i think this sums up my character.

Not too strong considering what I've seen from some people [A guy who could run 25 times the speed of light, for instance, on another forum], but still a bit powerful. You also have a friendship with one Pred who's very unlikely to be friendly to something the size of a human [Anko]

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he discovered that he was half breed when he was 14
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one year passed,
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nine years(two months passed on earth will Mike and claire were in alegasia).
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two years passed

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He'd be 26, not 17, if he was in the realm that had two years pass. The temporal distortion would not slow his age unless he spent those nine years training with his bodily functions only working for a two-month period. This shouldn't matter much, though, as Half-Dragons have silly-long lives and he's also on a Planet where aging is moot until a certain point.

ah that's the funny thing somehow he fixed his age to 17 by using some of his ancient magic he enhierited from both the dark ancients and the ancients( they can choose to be any age they want)

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he can use many spells just by thought

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Which type of spell, and one must also consider what one considers uber powerful. One may see a Fireball capable of reducing a man to cinders at will powerful, another might consider it nothing and start citing reasons why such as Magic / Fire resistance, dodging the fireball, Pre-Cog to dodge the aim, etc.

well he can use all form of magic and just create a new spell or an old well known spell by thought but he only uses minor and less powerful spells just even a battle out like fighting a army of zombies.

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but when his darkerself (true form) takes over, his power increases enough to challenge four titans at once.

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though I do think most people will find the power to challenge Four Giant-Beings at once a bit much.

his true form is alot different and is romured to be the form of the gate keeper of hell but its just a romur.

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The control of every element and sub-element is also seemingly a bit much. We're speaking an elementalist who can cast whatever they want at once.

well mike can just chose which element he wants to control but he can only control five elements because of his ancient bloodline which are fire, earth, fire, wind, light, and dark. of course it also may seem a bit much to

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he can shoot a target from 200 ft away.

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How long to aim are we talking here? Are we speaking take time to aim, steady himself, fire, etc? Or something like Shoot 'em Up Smith who'll be shooting the swirling rails on a tilt-a-whirl, had something like a 70% accuracy rate while descending a stairwell on a rope and twirling around to shoot those rising, etc?

he can just aim and shoot. it mainly deals with his enhanced eye sight since hes half dragon

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if you think mike is uber strong just tell if he is. i think this sums up my character.

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Not too strong considering what I've seen from some people [A guy who could run 25 times the speed of light, for instance, on another forum], but still a bit powerful. You also have a friendship with one Pred who's very unlikely to be friendly to something the size of a human [Anko]

well thxs and i guess its just a temperary friendship and oh shoot i left out luna whos part nature, ice and darkness naga(Her kin apparently were of a mixed naga race living on another world) and becomes Mikes naga daughter(going to write a story for that)

Goldclaw, at risk of being a cross posting bastard, I'm gonna suggest that you should have a calibration as to why your character may not be well received...

Go run him through the Mary Sue Litmus Test.

yeah i think ill just make it so that he can only be able to fight one titan and make it so that he can only control six elements and make it so that he can only use magic he learned and magic that he learns later on. ill toon down his evil as well so that be wont be able to take on four titans once but his evil side will still be a bloodthirsty bitch( im not change his personality one bit). well i think that will do.

Now that the writing contest is over and all, I can show the character profiles for my preds... No, I didn't create any character representing me in Felarya. Mary Sues aren't my way for creating characters. I only have one Mary Sue-esque character and he's nothing but myself in the Fanhunter universe in a very burlesque way.

It's true that a character can have something from you - either Mary Sue or not -, but this is not the case of my Felaryan characters... maybe because I'm not in the whole macrophilia and vore fetishes.

Yes, I know none of them will ever be an 'official Felaryan character', but the thing is that I've enjoyed creating them, especially Kyria. She's so lovable. ^^

So here are my two hungry ladies... Be careful when near them. xD (There's a third character and she has already appeared in one of my stories, but only here you'll know her name.)

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Name: Kyria.
Nickname: The speechless beauty.

Species: Fairy.
Gender: Female.
Age: Unknown.
Birthplace: The Forest of Whispers.
Height: 5' 3" (it's her favourite size... something neither small nor big).
Weight: 96 lbs (in her favourite size).

Likes: Friends (especially Seelvee), humans (as food), echydins.
Dislikes: Bugs, tentacular monsters.

Abilities:
- Size-shifting magic.
- She knows the spoken and written forms of many human languages (learnt from Seelvee).

Pyshical description: Kyria has tanned skin, pointed ears and long reddish brown hair. Her eyes are golden, sometimes resembling jewels. Kyria has a set of four, blue-ish semi-transparent wings. Even though her hair is long, it is no impediment for flying, as her hair seems to hover magically once she flies.
Although many fairies don't wear any clothes, Kyria wears a bikini-like suit made of leaves, although the leaves aren't that big, making Kyria look 'barely naked'.

Personality: Kyria is a very nice person with anyone who isn't in her 'food' list. She's a very friendly fairy, trying always to look her best in front of others, showing them her friendly ways. She also uses this for tricking humans and nekos - but especially humans - who dare to get into the forest, unaware of its perils.
But sometimes she's also a bit childish, maybe becuase she's still "young". This makes her a playful character, either with her friends or with her food. Yes, she loves playing with her food - mainly humans -, seeing them struggle in her hand and her mouth, using her fingers or her tongue to tease them.

Relationships:
- Friends: Seelvee (dryad), Ipswen (female fairy).
- Enemies: None.

Background story:

Kyria is a big exception in the whispering forest obviously called The Forest of Whispers. Since she was born, Kyria was never able to say a word. Even though she was born mute, Kyria always tried to show her best to the rest of the fairy community she was living in. But as she couldn't join them in their whispering, Kyria felt they weren't interested in her and no one wanted to be her friend.

One day, Kyria met a young dryad, Seelvee, who didn't care about Kyria's condition. In fact, thanks to the combined efforts of Kyria and Seelvee, the rest of the fairies finally accepted their mute fellow. And thanks to that, Kyria began to live a life very similar to that of other fairies in The Forest of Whispers, although instead of whispering for tricking lost people - and soon-to-be food -, Kyria preferred to listen, since she found this amusing, more than if she could ever speak and whisper along with others.

Even though her age is unknown, Kyria is still a young maiden in the fairy standards and there are still many things in her life to be told... like how she met the strange tentacular with no tentacles and self-proclaimed superior being Tent'Akoo'Lyn or how she helped in stopping the Three Dark Sages. But of course, those are stories you'll have to patiently wait for, my friends.


Stories she's been in:
- Kyria's breakfast
- Madness in The Lair: Felaryan madness (Coming soon)
- ??? (coming soon)

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Name: Seelvee.

Species: Dryad.

Gender: Female.
Age: Unknown.
Birthplace: The Forest of Whispers.
Height: 100 feet.
Weight: Unknown.

Likes: Peace, humans (she likes how stupid they can be and they make an interesting chat before eating them).
Dislikes: Fire.

Abilities:
- Illusion, wind and earth magic.
- She knows the spoken and written forms of many human languages.
- Limb stretching.

Pyshical description: The division between her human-like and her tree-like parts begins with her navel. Below it, the brown trunk of a tree can be seen, with several branches coming out of it. Above the belly bottom, some little branches appear as well, but now you can see a naked woman's upper half.
Seelvee's skin is brown and quite similar to wood - although it's quite soft when you touch it -, with long dark green hair covered in leaves of the same colour and azure eyes. It hasn't been confirmed yet, but many people who have survived this forest's perils and managed to survive - nearly no one, and they lost their sanity - claim she's the most beautiful being they've seen in their lives.

Personality: Seelvee is in theory the typical wise and gentle dryad kind. That's the way she is, but also she can allow herself to be a bit mischievous. She loves teasing and it's something that, in her opinion, sets Seelvee apart from other dryads. Seelvee is a 'woman of honor' too, as she will never break a promise.
Also, Seelvee can be quite talkative. If you're her future morsel and she feels like it, you can have an interesting talk with her, exchanging opinions - usually about predators and how unfair life is - before you literally become part of her.

Relationships:
- Friends: Kyria (female fairy), the rest of the dryads of The Forest of Whispers.
- Enemies: None.

Background story:

Seelvee was nothing especial compared with other dryads in the past. She was like the usual dryad: peaceful, linked to the rest of the forest and the dryad community in it and feeding herself with careless explorers and adventurers.

Her story, however, changed the day she found a mute fairy. She learnt the name of the fairy was Kyria and Seelvee also managed to learn her story. Knowing of Kyria's situation, Seelvee didn't want the fairy to be sad because of her speechless condition. And so she tried her best to help Kyria, finally getting the fairy's acceptance in the community.

Satisfied with this, Seelvee always tries to help her best friend, the little mute fairy, in anything she needs, which includes looking for the best morsels.

Stories she's been in:
- A night with the dryad
- Kyria's breakfast
- Madness in The Lair: Felaryan madness (Coming soon)

Because we have several newcomers that this thread may be helpful for.

Yes, because new... uh... bies just dont bother to turn the pages.
Also: I spy with my little eye a "Search" button. USE IT!!!

observer88 wrote:

Yes, because new... uh... bies just dont bother to turn the pages.
Also: I spy with my little eye a "Search" button. USE IT!!!

If a person can't bother to look past page one of one subforum, what makes you think they'll bother to use the Search feature?

Malahite wrote:

If a person can't bother to look past page one of one subforum, what makes you think they'll bother to use the Search feature?

I agree

Flare continues to change as a character, taking in bits and pieces of other characters and TV shows. The current version of Flare has little to do with Felarya, but I thought I'd update anyway, since I've been gone for almost two years. So, here is the current Flare:

Race: Naga/dragon/mermaid, with a human form
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Red
Scale Color: Red
Hobbies: Drawing, writing, building robots and playing/making video games
Description: Flare stands 5'5", with long hair, tan skin and wire frame glasses.
Flare was born in a city in Florida, in the Unied States into a rich Japanese family that was part of a religion widely believed to be a cult(don't ask for the name, I won't give it here because it exists.), with blond hair, green eyes and the name Suzuka Ryuga. She was abused by her father, and eventually left the church, moving to Manhattan when she was 13. This was also around the time when Suzuka discovered that she wasn't human and her hair and eye color changed. Her grandmother, who was visiting America at the time, took care of her until she died, a year later, leaving everything to Suzuka, who, a day later, had her name legally changed to Flare Hakamoru. Flare used some of the money to buy herself a mansion in Yonkers. a year after this, Flare lost her right arm while traveling with a friend, and (literally) single-handedly built herself a mechanical replacement. After Flare returned home, she transferred into Saunders high school.

Misc. facts: Flare's personality and skills with a revolver are similar to that of Rusuna Tendo, from the anime Grenadier. However, she has a short temper and is easily more willing to fight. In one massive, multi-anime fan fiction, Flare is the inventor of the Tachikoma from Ghost in the Shell, leaving a giant plot hole in that her Tachikoma can transform into cars, and latter jets. Mirroring both of her original naga versions, Flare can't understand why humans don't accept non-humans( for this reason, she remains in her human form unless she is at home), although is more disgusted at how people treat each other. Alternately, yet another version of Flare leaves her completely human, but princess of an entire universe.

Feign wrote:

Go run him through the Mary Sue Litmus Test.

I just took that test, simply because the link was there. Honestly, I think the scoring system is flawed. You can wrack up too many points for the score to go by tens. Assuming the highest score you can get is, for example, 2,000, the final score should be maybe 1,500 or above, not 71 or above.

Yes, we all agree that there are some flaws with it.

However, it needs to be somewhat harsh. Why? Too many characters that make this character look as harmful as a kitten, while also making this or this character look like someone you should run across on your way to the grocery store down the street.

Oh, and they're secretive brooders that have masses of adoring fans that the character would give their life for.

I'd rather a chart that's overly harsh to discourage people than one that's too lenient and allows said characters to continue to breed like wildfire.

Meh. It's arguable that I may have said that partially because I failed, but still, the margin of error is a bit way too low

Actually, going over the test again, part of the reason I failed and that the scoring system is flawed is that a lot of the questions(mostly around skills and high school) are legitimate, real-world possibilities, such as being in a band, being head cheerleader, or computer hacking. I took it again, ignoring those real-world possibilities, and I didn't fail as bad passed by a thread.

If this thread is being resurrected, and since I've never posted in it, my characters are here.

In brief, my main "quartet" of friends consists in Milly (giantess), Jissy (naga), Tina (tomthumb) and Joanna (sort-of-tomthumb). They're the ones who are developped in most of my Felarya stories, I think. I have a few other characters too.

Working on the update for Flare's bio. Not quite 100% done with it though.

Name: Flare (Not confermed if that is her real name)
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Class: Dragoon/Fire Elemental (Phoenix)
Race: Lamia
Weapons: Primary- Spear, Secondary- Knife, lightning pistol

Bio- At a young age, Flare was taken by a human family, after her biologial family was killed. When she was 10, she started her training as a Fighter, with dreams of becoming a dragoon knight. Not long after mastering the basics, she took up the spear, and began her training to be a full Dragoon Knight. When she was in her mid-teens, she came across a wounded Phoenix. Despite the heat and flames from it's body, Flare tried to treat it's injuries. However, a bandit group attacked, hoping to take the phoenix's feathers for use as Phoenix Downs, but Flare fought back, however she was knocked out, and the phoenix attacked. However, before the bandits got to it, it burst into flames, killing it's would-be killers, but it had expended a lot of it's strength in doing so, and was unable to self-resurrect, so it entered Flare's body, using their shared strength to sustain themselves. In return for Flare allowing the spirit to inhabit her body, the phoenix allowed Flare to tap into some it's powers and abilities, thus giving Flare the ability to use Magic, and be able to use fire to heal and refresh herself, and to self-resurrect if need be. For the next few years, she worked as a freelancer, enhancing her skills and abilites, then she was called upon to work as a scout exploring a new plane that was discovered...however the inital scout team disappeared.

In her year since she arrived in Felarya, she's discovered a number of new things, made a number of new allies, discovered new threats, and even became a mother as well.

It is also rumored that under great duress, such as when she is heavily wounded, The Phoenix in her awakens and she turns into a phoenix-human hybrid, possessing great destructive power.

Abilities:

Innate abilities-
Absorb-Fire
Weakness-Ice/Cold
Jump
Fireshield (Elemental)


Spells-
Fire 1-3
Cure 1-2
Life 1-2
Auto-life (AKA Life-3)
Flare

Skills-

Charm- Entices an enemy. Effects very baised on will of target.
Firestrike: leaps into the air, catches weapon on fire, comes down causing a small explosion that damages nearby enemies. Fire elemental damage
Fireshield: a ring of fire surrounds her, causing any attacker to be burned. Fire elemental damage
Flame Twister: Creates a tornado of fire, causing all nearby enemies to be flung about in the air. Fire/Wind damage, requires a lot of focus to maintain.
Fire Blast: A beam of fire is fired at one enemy. Fire damage
Firestorm: Storm clouds gather overhead, and fireballs start to rain down on the surrounding area. Fire damage, unblockable, long cast time.
Mega Flare: Blasts a powerful blast at enemies, obliterating anything in it's path. (Similor to, but weaker then, Bahamut's attack) Non-elemental damage, unblockable.



*Additional Elemental abilities*

Fire weapon: Can use natural abilities to create weapons. Non-elemental damage
Sacred Fire: Flames spring up all around a single enemy, burning them severely. Holy/Fire damage
Flame Whip: Flames cover lower 1/2 of arms and hands, and reaches out 10 feet. Attacks a single enemy repeatedly. Fire damage
Phoenix Talons: Barehanded attacks gain slashing and fire damage.
Healing Fire: Blue flames surround friendliest, curing them. Healing.
Phoenix Flame: Revives fallen friendly. Healing.
Terra-Flare: Fires an extremely powerful beam, upon detonation explodes with the force of a 10-megaton nuclear device.

A note on the elemental form: It's very rare, and to date it has not appeared.

I imagine there would be some confusion if your character met mine, as they both have the same name; Flare.