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asaenvolk
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 1:21 pm

Oosoon berries taste a bit like chocolate, white grapes, and blueberries, they have a fairly high nutritional value, but they are praised for uses in alchemy more than as a food. Being a magical fruit it effects some innately magical races, fairies in particular, in an interesting way, basically it intoxicates them, it does not have this effect on non magical races.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 2:35 pm

Somehow I really thought I had added them a while ago o.o

Well if you agree with the disclaimer I'll do that now Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 2:38 pm

sure, well obviously they are in the misty glade, they are probably in the lake of illusion area as well. but I leave that up to you.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 2:46 pm

congrats. now like with all other new posts, I must have my fun reading around, and searching for it X3
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 2:51 pm

Although this is not the Q&A, one important question about the berries still remain: if they affect magical creatures, do they also affect people with strong magic, like mages? They possess magic after all. Also, what about elves? They tend to have some inclination for magic.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 2:52 pm

well it was meant to be people with innate magic, the sorc vrs the wizard in D&D terms.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 2:53 pm

What about elves then? The wiki implies that they are generally sensitive to magic.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 2:54 pm

lets leave that up to the author of who ever uses them in a story, but probably no, that is talent, not innate magical abilities
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 3:21 pm

I would safely assume so, yes.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeMon Apr 02, 2012 6:06 pm

On the page entitled Dridders, located in the second to last sentence of the last paragraph it says
"There is many proofs that dridders once formed an organized, sophisticated, rich and powerful civilization with some old Victorian-styled structures and clothes."
I think this needs to be changed to something along the lines of 'There is much proof' or 'A lot of proof has been found, suggesting'
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeTue Apr 03, 2012 1:46 am

Thanks; fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeThu Apr 05, 2012 11:52 am

I found an spelling error.
on the guardians page, under Quaz's description it says "He can gather, in an instant, every specie of Felaryan insect..."
It should be changed to species.
I also found what i believe to be a grammatical error.
In the introduction paragraph of Minor races2
Here are listed the sentient races of Felarya that are either too rare, too few, too mysterious or extinct to be properly classified.
I suspect this part of the list need to be moved closer to the front of the list to assist sentence flow. Remove the too rare, too few, etc. and extinct to be classified just becomes awkward wording.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeThu Apr 05, 2012 12:14 pm

Thanks; fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeWed Apr 11, 2012 7:48 am

For Kowo cats: the fur on their head is as silky and smooth than that of a real cat.

Is it "smoother than that of a real cat" or "as smooth as that of a real cat"?
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeWed Apr 11, 2012 8:01 am

Shady Knight wrote:
For Kowo cats: the fur on their head is as silky and smooth than that of a real cat.

Is it "smoother than that of a real cat" or "as smooth as that of a real cat"?

I've fixed it to "as silky and smooth as that of other cats".

Thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeSun Apr 29, 2012 6:35 pm

Faldong gems are worth 100 SK, and a tiny fragment of ascarlin at 50,000 SK, yet I don't see them in the list of exchange rates, nor can I find the currency page without searching for it in the search bar...
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeWed May 02, 2012 3:30 pm

Planar Chorydium, where it reads, "and has the unique ability to make the layers between dimensions thiner." >> Should be changed to "thinner"

"It's a bit hard to tell if they are the cause this instability," >> "cause of this instability"
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeWed May 02, 2012 7:15 pm

I have been looking over The Jungle of Perils and have been wondering why in stories it says there are beasts like Flying Squids yet it doesn't have them in the page? Is it just me or is the Jungle of Perils missing a few of (or if not a lot) of the creatures that truly make it the Jungle of Perils?
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeThu May 03, 2012 2:11 am

Nyaha wrote:
Planar Chorydium, where it reads, "and has the unique ability to make the layers between dimensions thiner." >> Should be changed to "thinner"

"It's a bit hard to tell if they are the cause this instability," >> "cause of this instability"

Thanks; fixed.

Solomon wrote:
I have been looking over The Jungle of Perils and have been wondering why in stories it says there are beasts like Flying Squids yet it doesn't have them in the page? Is it just me or is the Jungle of Perils missing a few of (or if not a lot) of the creatures that truly make it the Jungle of Perils?

The wiki sets the canon for stories, rather than the reverse. In the wiki, flying squids are known to be in Deeper Felarya.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeThu May 10, 2012 8:16 am

There are multiple instances where "lose" is spelled "loose" instead. I can't really specify all the entries, cause they're everywhere, but the last one I saw was in the recreation one.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeThu May 10, 2012 8:28 am

oh yeah I do this one quite often ^^;
thanks for the notice
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeThu May 10, 2012 2:17 pm

So about two weeks ago I posted a statement in this same thread regarding currency and missing an exchange rate, but it seems to have gone unnoticed:

Faldong gems are worth 100 SK, and a tiny fragment of ascarlin at 50,000 SK, yet I don't see them in the list of exchange rates, nor can I find the currency page without searching for it in the search bar...
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeFri May 11, 2012 4:22 pm

On the chronology page of the wiki, where it reads, "3501 B.U. - Elven explorers scouting the Great marshes are surprised to find draconic relatives of theirs, the Mist Elves.", the 'Mist Elves' link goes here instead of here.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeSat May 12, 2012 2:22 am

Archmage_Bael wrote:

Faldong gems are worth 100 SK, and a tiny fragment of ascarlin at 50,000 SK, yet I don't see them in the list of exchange rates, nor can I find the currency page without searching for it in the search bar...

I'm not exactly sure what you're asking. The exchange rate for faldong gems and ascarlin, as you describe it, is included already in the "currency rate" section.

And where would you want the currency page to be linked to from?

Nyaha wrote:
On the chronology page of the wiki, where it reads, "3501 B.U. - Elven explorers scouting the Great marshes are surprised to find draconic relatives of theirs, the Mist Elves.", the 'Mist Elves' link goes here instead of here.

Thanks; fixed.


Last edited by French snack on Sat May 12, 2012 2:22 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : "Faldong gems", not "folding gems". Damn autocorrect...)
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 14 Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2012 8:27 pm

Currency could be under culture and customs, or under Negav maybe.

I'm just saying that so far it looks like this:

Based on universal rates :
* 1 Skevol is worth 12 Platalis
* 1 Skevol is worth 2 Kejdoran shkings
* 2 Skevols are worth 1 Gol
* 5 Skevols are worth 1 Yolem
-100 Skevols are worth 1 Faldong Gem
* 120 Skevols are worth 1 Tetros
* 200 Skevols are worth 1 Rainbow pearl
-50,000 Skevols are worth about a tiny ascarlin fragment

but where I have the dashes you could put in the rates.
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