Part 2 and so on. (Part 27 is up)

Part two is here. All upcoming parts will be posted in this thread, for all those who care.

Whoa. You are good at wordplay. I can't tell you how great this is getting.

Wow, thanks, and here I was thinking I didn't do such a good job. Hopefully you'll enjoy tomorrows as well.

Ok part 3 is here, not to sure about how this came out. Was kind of hard to pull it off in the first person.

its good. that must have been hard to write.

Ok Part 4 is here. I had planned to make a part a day but I've been really busy these past three days, so I'm sorry for the delay for those of you who read.

Part 5 is here. I have to admit, I didn't originaly plan to keep the driver alive, but it seems to have worked out that way.

Part 6 is up. I hope you're still enjoying the story, those of you who read.

Part 7 is also up. Heh, the last 4 posts in this thread have been by me

Doing good so far.

That Vivian sure is an evil one, though.

Part 8 is here. Not too sure if Vivian would give up that easily

Wow 8 already ?
I'll check it right now ^_^

Part 9 is up. I hope I am keeping this interesting for everybody who reads

Davis wrote:

Part 9 is up. I hope I am keeping this interesting for everybody who reads

You are, Davis. Whenever I read it, I'm compelled to continue reading.

That's a definite plus.

Part 10 is here. Sorry this one took longer to make, I spent too much time yesterday watching Ergo Proxy , fantastic anime.

Busy with family over the past couple of days, welcome to 2008! Part 11 is here. First part of the new year, whooo! I also just noticed I might not have made descriptions of any of my main characters , I'll have to check my previous parts but I'm pretty sure I left descriptions out.

Part 12 is up, a new character is introduced!

Part 13 is here. This was a little delayed due to classes resuming, but it is the longest part yet. (Though it still takes only like a minute or two to read. )

Part 14 is finally here. Yeah, hopefully I will be submiting these a bit more often soon. Well I hope you guys still care. And does anybody know what the deal is with the mudkip avatar on deviant art??

Excellent work, man. Keep it up. we need more indepth stories like yours.

Part 15 is here. Longer than the last parts but still not that long of a read, why is it that I can't feel like writing unless it's a time I should be asleep? Ugh, I have to up in less than 5 hours, I think I'll go pass out now...

And, part 16 is up much more quickly than expected, but not longer than the adverage size of the parts. That makes 3 parts this month (still doesn't beat 11 in December though).

Part 17 is here, will Davis and company ever catch a break? Probably not.

Looks good, man. These fellas just never get a break.

Part 18 is up. Still haven't named the new guy .