Wiki corrections

They haven't been fixed, thank you for pointing it

And thanks for pointing those various errors, it is very helpful ^^ I'm going to make the changes.

From the Mist Fairy's entry.

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This specie of fairy can be mostly found in the misty glade and parts of the mist ocean.If most fairies are good at illusions, then mist fairies are masters of it.

There is no space separating the two sentences.

Sean Okotami wrote:

From the Mist Fairy's entry.

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This specie of fairy can be mostly found in the misty glade and parts of the mist ocean.If most fairies are good at illusions, then mist fairies are masters of it.

There is no space separating the two sentences.

Fixed.

Wiki: The Correctors wrote:

The entities known as " Correctors" are strange and mysterious planewalker beings appearing in flowing grey cloaks that conceal entirely their bodies. Just watching a Corrector standing is enough to make any creature uneasy. It's as if they simply don't belong here, and that their mere presence is an aberration in the reality. They are said to be a very ancient race, with the role of watching over time and space, and they are the representation of order in its most absolute form. They are extremely powerful entities, with an incredible control over dimensional magic, and they have no qualms whatsover to use it in order to erase anything they deem a threath to the equilibrium of the universe. their fundamental belief is that too much dimensional anomalies will end up tearing the fabric of reality appart, leaving free rein to the "outer-ones", nighmarish things dwelling on the "other side" of the reality, so to speak, who constantly try to find a breach. When they do, the casulaties are generally counted by hundreds of billions and many worlds are destroyed.

For that reason, the Correctors took a dim view on Felarya and its unstable nature, and soon decided it should be removed from existence altogether, the world being a potential weak point in the fabric of Reality. However, for unclear reasons that are perhaps related on how Felarya was created and its very nature, they couldn't simply destroy it from afar. Instead, the Correctors had to enter it first and defeat its guardians. However the Guardians were apparently expecting them and were very well prepared for their arrival, presenting them with a formidable defense. The correctors were clearly surprised by such a fierce opposition and had to retreat temporarily. They came back though, and it was the beginning of a ferocious conflict, with the Correctors making their maximum to kill every Guardians, and erase Felarya.

The War wrote:

It's very difficult to say how exactly events unfolded, as it goes back to millenias ago. It is believed the correctors started to attack in successive waves of deadly and synchronized assaults, each time coming back with a new set of their strange and terrible weapons.

Correctors are said to have started their war on Felarya like they always do, erasing things standing in their way with a cold, methodical and monstruously insensitive mindset, taking them apart and removing them from reality altogether, or converting them to their side. A turned creature becomes a " Grey" ; They lose all their color and become mindless and entirely obedient drones. There is no known way to turn a grey back. The correctors struck devastating blows to Felarya over and over again, taking it litteraly apart piece by piece, changing its face forever, and affecting entire regions for the millenias to come. Some sequels can still be seen today and the instability of Miragia forest is widely believed to be a direct consequence of a particularily violent attack. Each of those waves were cut by deceptive period of calms between them, sometimes lasting decades.

It is said they managed to turn several guardians into greys, which prompted the guardians to create Alcazath and the Titan(s) as a defense force, as constructs cannot be turned and are immune to all sort of mind-affecting attacks used by the Correctors. From there, the conflict only grew in intensity, the Correctors becoming more and more ruthless. At a point, their tactics changed however, and they started to realize that they wouldn't achieve their goals without eliminating every guardians first. Moreover, they worried that the incredibly violent and repeated clashes were progressively making Felarya even more unstable, thus even more dangerous for the rest of the universe. They soon were faced with a growing dilemna : either destroying Felarya quickly and cleanly, or giving up entirely. After all, better a *relatively* stable anomaly than an anomaly that is so dammaged it has become a ticking bomb.

Thus, in the last stages of the war, the correctors shifted their focus on the guardians alone, each of their attacks becoming formidable clashes among those beings. Most historians agree on the fact that, at a point, the Correctors somehow corrupted the mind of Alcazath the Titan king, making him erratic, demented and paranoid and turning him and his army of titans againt its creators. According to the legend, the Tedrek hammer developped creativity in Alcazath, which was the first step to have him becoming sentient and self-aware, and so a potential target for the Correctors' mind-affecting attacks.

Finally all came to an end during a last battle remembered as the "Battle of the blind king". It was a gigantic confrontation where each camps threw every ounce of their strenght in the fight. Army of savage and berserk titans rampaged through the land, legions of Adroms gated in and flooded every regions , and utter chaos spread all over Felarya. In the end, Felarya successfully repelled the assault, at the cost of enormous losses and staggering ravages and destruction. The corrector forces suffered even more though, and vanished for good, never to come back again. Felarya went down as one of their very rare defeat. Some claim they'll return one day, once they sense an opening among the guardians' defense. Felarya took numerous centuries to recover in what was know as the "Age of mirages", a dark time of chaos and unstability, with vanishing lands appearing everywhere, flickering landscapes, mirages, dimensional storms and other anomalies. The world slowly came back to a more normal state however, and nobody can really tell why.

Reality recomposer wrote:

erase a given element or creature and recompose the reality around it as if it never existed, and replace it with a new piece of reality.

Obliterators wrote:

One of the most terrible and most feared weapons used by the correctors, Obliterators are famous for their part in the war agaisnt the hyper-empire of Arshadas, when they anihilated the imperial Garjandhum walking forteress and all the forces entrenched within.

Those bizarre constructs look like enormous floating statues of varied appearances, but often representing three figures merged together, back to back. The figures themselves are mobile, slowly moving their arms or turning their heads. Just seeing one of those humongous behemoth floating in absolute silence is enough to send all but the bravest warriors running into a blind panic. Obliterators have the capacity of attacking by creating portal, through which, a ray of a formidable power will strike the target, and will very likely reduce it to dust. No one really know the exact nature of this blast, but some believe it comes from some kind of gigantic dimensional cannons, based on another world, that fire through portals and carry the ray to its target. The Obliterator would be merely placing the portal at the right angle in order to strike the target, and adjust its power. The destructive power of this ray is truly immense, able to pierce mountains, or vaporize cities in mere seconds. They are not very efficient at attacking small, nearby mobile targets, though. It is said some obliterators were deployed in Felarya at the beginning of the war, but at some point they disappeared from the battle ground altogether, the Correctors themselves fearing that their extremely destructive power could end up making the world even more unstable.

That's all the errors I could find in the Correctors' page. Something else, there is a lack of consistency with capitalized words such as Correctors, Guardians, and Obliterators. Some are capitalized, some are not. IMO, I'd keep them all capitalized so they talk about something specific, rather than a generic term.

Okay, I fixed most of the ones you listed, but seeing as the page is still a work in progress I left the other errors alone; no point in cleaning up something that is just going to be changed again.

Sean Okotami wrote:

A turned creature becomes a " Grey"

Why did you bold "grey"?

Sean Okotami wrote:

Something else, there is a lack of consistency with capitalized words such as Correctors, Guardians, and Obliterators. Some are capitalized, some are not. IMO, I'd keep them all capitalized so they talk about something specific, rather than a generic term.

I Don't Know About That, Instead I Think We Should Capitalize Everything; Makes It Seem More Important. Also Drives O.C.D. People Nuts.
But in all seriousness, yeah, you are probably right.

There's a space between the first quotation mark and the word Grey.

Oh, okay, looks like I fixed it already.

Negavian People wrote:

Negavians form a very cosmopolitan people, coming from worlds from all around the universe. Curious adventurers, greedy treasure hunters, foolhardy warriors, ruthless thugs, stranded travelers, self-proclaimed heroes... they all came there with the prospect of becoming fabulously rich, retrieving legendary artefacts, becoming stronger, living a peaceful and eternal life, or simply by accident. Even with so many varied origins however, living in a world such as Felarya gave Negavians some commonly shared traits. They are a hardened and rather fatalistic people. They tend to be a quite egoistical and cynical lot, not very easy to impress and difficult to cow. Wise Magiocrats know their rules on Negav cannot be too tough and must remain bearable, unless they want to have their heads on a pike. Negavians have revolted many time in the past, and have gone trough many catastrophes, but, like their city, they are still there. Negavians tend to complain a lot about life on Felarya, but in at same time, they have a sort of pride of being there, on what is widely recognized as one of the most dangerous known worlds for humans. Moreover, being in Negav feels like being in the center of things, with so many different people passing through, carrying with them rumors, epic tales, and, sometimes, fantastic treasures. Negav is the city where adventures and legends are born. Many people who have lived in Negav for several years, but decided one day to leave Felarya, find themselves irresistibly drawn back to the city a few years later. They say that life does not have the same flavor outside Negav. Like the saying goes: "Once a Negavian, always a Negavian."

Negavians are naturally cautious of non-humans. With some many beings coming from other worlds, they have build at least a certain tolerance to them, but they aren't welcoming them with open arms either. For example, many taverns and bars would refuse entry to creatures with too much arms or inhuman features. The situation is even worse for tauric beings. Simply entering Negav would be very difficult for them, and the rare ones would would be admitted, would feel an acute latent hostility around them.

There are all the errors I could find.

Fixed, along with a few other errors. (I've left the commas as they are, though.) Thanks.

This may have nothing to do with this thread. I've noticed that within a couple areas of the wiki there are names of creatures and/or beings that when clicked on just takes you to the page where it is and yet no entry of it is mentioned.

Here are a couple examples:

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Danger: Normal, Hazardous in the past
Sub zones: Buried palace, Sea of sinking sand
Inhabitants: cactus dryads, sand walkers, desert razias, time sharks, beasts of the past, rock harpies, sandfishes, earth mouths, tunneler worms, sand elementals, solar serpents, antillons, sunas, kuras, sand whales, shimmerlings

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Notys
Race: Dimensional Chimera

The names that are in bold don't have an entry. I mean, last I saw they did and now they don't. Were they taken off or did something happen to make them not appear?

I think that sand elementals were removed. Dunno about the razias though.
Also, Noyts' race should be species.
Race is a term that applies to humans. People of the same race are people of the same genetic stock within a species.

Hm, I see. Well crap, if the sand elementals were removed, then there's go a character idea. Was there a reason for the removal of them?

Though, I've looked for Notys's species, it mainly directs to Demi-Chimeras. Same goes for the desert razias. I think that entries that do not have an entry anymore or was removed, the names (plus link) should taken off the inhabitants list. The names that don't have an entry but need one, may need attention so that people browsing the wiki won't get confused and ask twenty questions of the same type.

Goldclaw wrote:

Hm, I see. Well crap, if the sand elementals were removed, then there's go a character idea. Was there a reason for the removal of them?

Though, I've looked for Notys's species, it mainly directs to Demi-Chimeras. Same goes for the desert razias. I think that entries that do not have an entry anymore or was removed, the names (plus link) should taken off the inhabitants list. The names that don't have an entry but need one, may need attention so that people browsing the wiki won't get confused and ask twenty questions of the same type.

That's right there is a couple of dead links. The Dimensionnal chimeras are extremely rare creatures, almost uniques and so don't really constitute an actual species. They are the stuff of legends.

As for sand elementals well they still exist but they are merged with the earth elementals. somehow I think it makes sense to have them being a sub-species of this group ^^

Agreed. Sand is work down rock. Rock is part of earth. Therefore Sand elementals are just earth elementals who like the desert.

On the Fauna4 (Aquatic Fauna) page, the entry for Emerald Phoenix has a line where the word predators has two 's' instead of one.

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Rumor has it that one will be granted extraordinarily good luck should they manage to pluck one of the tail feathers of these marvelous birds. However, recalling the fact that the Chordoni waterfalls are inhabited by various predatorss, including Vivian, the risks might possibly far outweigh the rewards.

Additionally, the navigation on this page does not include the entry for 'Dimensionally unstable terrain fauna'.

fixed, thank you ^^

Well, I guess I can nitpick with the best of em', (always been better at editing than actual writing) and I've been on the wiki researching for my group contest thingy, so and I came a cross a couple things.

Wiki wrote:

It's probably the main reason why mermaids are so famous for their beautiful singing voices; it's simply one their natural methods of communication.

In the mermaid entry: I'm pretty sure an 'of' goes between 'one' and 'their'.

I wrote:

Furthermore, this strange plant plant is both orderless and almost impervious to detection by magic, meaning it can usually only be found via touch, and most often by accident.

In the second page of the plant life section, under Spectral Weed, I'm quite certain the person who wrote that entry only intended a single 'plant' in that sentence, and meant 'odorless' rather than 'orderless'. How can I be so sure? I wrote that entry, embarrassingly enough. Wow, two giant mistakes in one sentence, maybe I'm not so good at editing.

Fixed.

Spelling issues:

Elementals page -

*Water elementals are, as they name suggest, elementals inhabiting water undr different forms. Their bodies are usually very malleabe and able to take different forms.*


Minor races page -

*What is especially terrifying is that there is(wrong grammar) are no known limits on how many targets can be marked this way.*

*There are numerous creatures labeled as "ghosts", sometimes inacurately.*

Fixed; thanks.

Subeta is listed under inhabitants as apposed to characters on the Ascarlin mountains entry.

mhh strange error. Fixed now, thanks

I could be wrong(english is not my main language)
But in the fairy kingdom page:

Tasenya Bridge

A bridge from the Sunfall thicket leading to the west toward Akaptor desert. The name Tasenya is that of a powerful ghosts who used to rule and terrorize the region and was defeated by fairies long ago

Is it one ghost or multiple? And if there are more then one then I think it 'were' not 'was'

Pim18 wrote:

I could be wrong(english is not my main language)
But in the fairy kingdom page:

Tasenya Bridge

A bridge from the Sunfall thicket leading to the west toward Akaptor desert. The name Tasenya is that of a powerful ghosts who used to rule and terrorize the region and was defeated by fairies long ago

Is it one ghost or multiple? And if there are more then one then I think it 'were' not 'was'

Fixed.

While my deduction that the ghost was singular is not foolproof (because English is not Karbo's native language), the "a" in "The name Tasenya is that of a powerful..." heavily implies that there was only one ghost.
If there were multiple ghosts, the sentence probably would have looked like this: "The name Tasenya is that of a group of powerful ghosts who used to rule and terrorize the region and was defeated by fairies long ago." or (maybe) this: "The name Tasenya is the name of the powerful ghosts who used to rule and terrorize the region and was defeated by fairies long ago".

Typically one can not replace "who" with "were", because "who" deals with people (and it is a pronoun), and "were" is... well it is hard to describe, but one of the things it is, is a verb, so typically it can't replace a pronoun. As far as pluralization goes, "who" is both singular and plural. Examples: "Who are these bandits?" (a plural use), "Lone shadowy figure, who are you!?" (singular use), "Who are you?" (singular or plural).