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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:13 am | |
| I think I mentioned that a while ago, but I am going to drop the Micolon name. So the name will be replaced by Tonho in the wiki. | |
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Anime-Junkie Loremaster
Posts : 2690 Join date : 2007-12-16 Age : 31 Location : The Country of Kangaroos and Criminal Scum
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:45 am | |
| On the elementals page - Quote :
- Because of Felarya's magical nature, many elementals are able to animate important masses of matter, making them huge.
Important is not a synonym for 'large.' I recommend changing the sentence to: Due to Felarya's magical nature, elementals are able to animate much matter then they would otherwise be able to. This means that on average, the size of elementals are comparable to that of giant predators. | |
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Jætte_Troll Friend of the Jotun
Posts : 2769 Join date : 2009-02-02 Age : 32 Location : Over There
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:28 am | |
| In the Chronology -
"10 780 B.U. - Malyra, an Earth Elemental princess is slain by a squad of Titans. His neighbor and lover, King Trazix, wows to make Alcazath pay for his crimes."
(Here Malyra is said to be a princess, but in the second sentence is referred to as a "he". So, either change "princess" to "prince" or "His" to "Her".)
Also, at the top of the Chronology -
"The help of Majuras wasalso invaluable in that regard"
(Should be a space between was and also)
In Negav's Middle Tier, in the Elven District section
However, used to live in their tight-knit communities.
(Should be "used to living") | |
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French snack Moderator
Posts : 1192 Join date : 2009-04-05 Location : in Milly's stomach. Care to join me?
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:14 am | |
| - Anime-Junkie wrote:
- Important is not a synonym for 'large.'
Fixed; thanks. JT, it seems Karbo has fixed the points you raised. | |
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Jasconius Survivor
Posts : 810 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : Pit of Tartarus
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Jul 15, 2011 5:02 pm | |
| Not sure if this is the right place to suggest this.
A minor suggestion, but perhaps the various fungi under "Plant Life" on the wiki could be separated into their own page, such as "Fungal Life" due to the fact that fungi are not plants. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Jul 16, 2011 1:55 am | |
| Well that's a good suggestion, but maybe when their number becomes more substantial? ^^ Anyway the flora page will undergo some modifications at some points as it could be better organized I think. | |
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Krisexy26 Survivor
Posts : 775 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 40 Location : Where the river narrows
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sun Jul 24, 2011 2:08 pm | |
| - Quote :
- More info about Tanya can be found in Katrika's diary
in tanya's page on the wiki, the link to tanya's full story doesnt work anymore | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Mon Jul 25, 2011 5:46 am | |
| Oh that's right. Fixed, thanks ^^ | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Mon Jul 25, 2011 4:07 pm | |
| In Nikita's entry, it says that she's thirty-five feet tall, but the template says that she's 42 ft tall. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:38 am | |
| ah right I forgot to change that ^^; thank you. | |
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AisuKaiko Keeper of Flat Chests
Posts : 2078 Join date : 2009-12-21 Age : 33 Location : In Ruby's cave in the Imoreith Tundra
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:56 am | |
| The Icepoint is still in the Plant life2 page, and wasn't moved over to the Fungi page. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Jul 30, 2011 12:49 am | |
| ah right. Fixed, thanks ^^ | |
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Anime-Junkie Loremaster
Posts : 2690 Join date : 2007-12-16 Age : 31 Location : The Country of Kangaroos and Criminal Scum
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:42 am | |
| On the dridders page; - Quote :
- Their natural weapons are their claws and their venom which is often lethal, even at small doses. They actually possess a wide variety of poisons, some of them which will only make the bitten creature sleepy.
Just a bit of terminology confusion here. Poison is not the same as venom. Poisons are effective if inhaled or consumed. Venoms aren't (that's why you can suck snake venom out of a wound and not die). Venoms are effective when injected into the body through a bite or stinger. | |
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AisuKaiko Keeper of Flat Chests
Posts : 2078 Join date : 2009-12-21 Age : 33 Location : In Ruby's cave in the Imoreith Tundra
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:04 pm | |
| I noticed that despite Masumi being said to live in the Bulvon Wood on her bio, she is not listed as one of the characters on the zone's page. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Sep 02, 2011 7:45 am | |
| Oh right, I'm fixing that, thank you ^^ | |
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Amaroq Great warrior
Posts : 470 Join date : 2008-07-19 Age : 36
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:40 am | |
| http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Minor_races2#Inus
For the most part, they are open, frank and friendly people.
As a people, They tend to wear their emotions right on their sleeves, so to speak.
As far as hobbies and interests go...
They love learning new things , and picking up new tricks or new ways to occupy their time.
They have a reputation for a below-average attention span, and tend to bounce back and forth between several interests depending on their mood.
Compared to Nekos, the Inu are generally more omnivorous by nature.
They do enjoy meat, and are quite capable as hunters, but they also enjoy a large variety of foods.
Even relatively small quantities of it can make them ill, or be potentially lethal.
This has caused some Inu to refer to chocolate-chip muffins as "death-muffins".
There is also a Inu-picture missing, maybe you want to use this one or an edited version of this (I'd give you permission to use it) :-P http://xxamaroqxx.deviantart.com/#/d48mp7f | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:34 am | |
| http://felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Phantom_Elves
The Shamshis of "phantome elves"
I think it should be "or". | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:59 am | |
| Thank you for the notices ^_^ | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:27 pm | |
| In Crisis' entry, her name is spelled Criss in the Hunting Habits section. Also, she's referred as a nature naga at the very end. Given the new way of referring to common naga types, shouldn't she be called an arboreal naga? | |
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French snack Moderator
Posts : 1192 Join date : 2009-04-05 Location : in Milly's stomach. Care to join me?
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:55 pm | |
| - Sean Okotami wrote:
- In Crisis' entry, her name is spelled Criss in the Hunting Habits section. Also, she's referred as a nature naga at the very end. Given the new way of referring to common naga types, shouldn't she be called an arboreal naga?
Fixed her name. (Leaving the issue of what type of naga she is up to Karbo.) | |
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/Fish/ Hero
Posts : 1301 Join date : 2008-05-04 Age : 33 Location : The Stream of Consciousness
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Sep 22, 2011 2:28 am | |
| French Snack! Jissy is having a size paradox.
"Height: 93 feet"
"Jissy is a giant naga living north-west of the ruins of Ur-Sagol. At about sixty-seven feet..." | |
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French snack Moderator
Posts : 1192 Join date : 2009-04-05 Location : in Milly's stomach. Care to join me?
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:25 am | |
| - /Fish/ wrote:
- French Snack! Jissy is having a size paradox.
"Height: 93 feet"
"Jissy is a giant naga living north-west of the ruins of Ur-Sagol. At about sixty-seven feet..." Oops... So she is. That's a result of her height having been updated to the new norms in the infobox, but not in the article. (Either that, or she periodically contracts...) Fixed; thanks. And welcome back! | |
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AisuKaiko Keeper of Flat Chests
Posts : 2078 Join date : 2009-12-21 Age : 33 Location : In Ruby's cave in the Imoreith Tundra
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sun Oct 02, 2011 3:26 pm | |
| On the Jetbikes pages...
"Loss of a jetbike over a trivial thing such as an entry test is deemed very wasteful and worse, unskilful"
It's 'unskillful' o:
Alllso, on the Predator Rumors page, there's a space between the last words of the sentences and the respective exclamation points.
As in, they are typed like this !
It should be like this! | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:01 am | |
| thanks for the remarks ^^
mhh for exclamation points, actually it's everywhere the same in the wiki.. In french we put a space between the end word and the "!", so I put one too without really thinking about it ^^; | |
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AisuKaiko Keeper of Flat Chests
Posts : 2078 Join date : 2009-12-21 Age : 33 Location : In Ruby's cave in the Imoreith Tundra
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:01 am | |
| Hum, I figured since the wiki is written in English, it would adhere to rules of the English language o3o | |
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