Felarya manga ^_^

Yeah, you're right... I was going to collaborate, but when you said that, I thought "Then it's no use". But if there's finally some interest in reviving it, contributions will come.

[BTW, this will be my last off-topic message... focusing back on the manga in 3... 2... 1...]

Now back to the manga, one thing I like is how the drayd mimetism has worked in it. That also reminds you that Felarya isn't safe and stepping out of a predator will lead you to another one.

Finally scrounged up enough money to buy a copy. It'll probably hurt me a little bit budget-wise this month, but I should be fine.

This is where the story and development take on a more serous tone. I like the added depth on the character. You get a lot more Anna action (who should have been the cover character) for all the extra screen time she gets. As for Anko as much as I was looking forward to seeing her she was shoved in her for no real reason. Although she stayed true to her sporadic character. She seemed more like a mid boss or annoying little sister who talks way to much. Because the way she come in and leaves and it is not smooth at all. Then we return to the story and more Vivian action. Then it ends with a cliff hanger. If anything this one makes you look forward to volume 5 like there is no tomorrow.

I say give it a look.

xlrp wrote:

This is where the story and development take on a more serous tone. I like the added depth on the character. You get a lot more Anna action (who should have been the cover character) for all the extra screen time she gets. As for Anko as much as I was looking forward to seeing her she was shoved in her for no real reason. Although she stayed true to her sporadic character. She seemed more like a mid boss or annoying little sister who talks way to much. Because the way she come in and leaves and it is not smooth at all. Then we return to the story and more Vivian action. Then it ends with a cliff hanger. If anything this one makes you look forward to volume 5 like there is no tomorrow.

I say give it a look.

Spoilers, I say. NO, bad xlrp!

Hey Karbo, big congratulations on publishing the #1 ebook of all time on Lulu.com with your Felarya Manga T1!
Top 100 in Ebooks - Lulu.com

And another congrats for having 3 in the top 10 of all time.

Keep up the good work!

woah o.o
this is.. very unexpected ^^;
but it feels motivating !

Reptillian wrote:

you should draw more chibis outside of the manga, cause they look adorable^^

It's funny you say that, I'm in a chibi mood right now ! XD

Spoiler:

mhh thank you for the remark about Anko. I'll try to introduce new characters more smoothly and naturally next time

xlrp wrote:

This is where the story and development take on a more serous tone. I like the added depth on the character. You get a lot more Anna action (who should have been the cover character) for all the extra screen time she gets. As for Anko as much as I was looking forward to seeing her she was shoved in her for no real reason. Although she stayed true to her sporadic character. She seemed more like a mid boss or annoying little sister who talks way to much. Because the way she come in and leaves and it is not smooth at all. Then we return to the story and more Vivian action. Then it ends with a cliff hanger. If anything this one makes you look forward to volume 5 like there is no tomorrow.

I say give it a look.

I don't care for Anna much. She serves a purpose, but it is not to entertain. Anko brought tons of laughs and was very wicked. She is definately a fave of mine. I'm kinda hoping she has it out for (a certain person) and won't stop until she gets (that person). Motto Anko kudasai!!!

I want the manga for the story and aesthetics of the art rather than the vore (although vore is interesting to me in a non-fetishist way, the ideas behind it are cool).

I've got the money, but I'm kinda afraid my parents'll come to my dorm for a visit and label me a psychopath (cause that's how they roll) for it

Still . . . WANT SO BADLY!!!

MrNobody13 wrote:

I want the manga for the story and aesthetics of the art rather than the vore (although vore is interesting to me in a non-fetishist way, the ideas behind it are cool).

I've got the money, but I'm kinda afraid my parents'll come to my dorm for a visit and label me a psychopath (cause that's how they roll) for it

Still . . . WANT SO BADLY!!!

That first part is a really good way to look at things. Its good to see more non-voraphiles turning up that find the world interesting ^^ Plus, the manga really isn't a fetish comic, and looking at it that way will only leave you disappointed, lol. Its more about the story and characters.

Its an e-book. Just hide it inside a couple folders and no one but you will be able to find it ^^

rcs619 wrote:

Its an e-book. Just hide it inside a couple folders and no one but you will be able to find it ^^

Better yet, put it in a .zip file and use fusion.bat to hide it inside a .jpg image.

rcs619 wrote:

MrNobody13 wrote:

I want the manga for the story and aesthetics of the art rather than the vore (although vore is interesting to me in a non-fetishist way, the ideas behind it are cool).

I've got the money, but I'm kinda afraid my parents'll come to my dorm for a visit and label me a psychopath (cause that's how they roll) for it

Still . . . WANT SO BADLY!!!

Its an e-book. Just hide it inside a couple folders and no one but you will be able to find it ^^

Bankstatement says it all

MrNobody13 wrote:

I want the manga for the story and aesthetics of the art rather than the vore (although vore is interesting to me in a non-fetishist way, the ideas behind it are cool).

You and me, mister, you and me. What I've read of the manga has been growing in interest, character development and story. The vore and macrophilia fetishes - which I don't share, yet respect - are secondary to a story focused on many characters and their situations in Felarya. And that's what got me in this place nearly 3 years ago: a curious world with strange logic, yet a formidable place for adventure and 'horror' stories - some people who have read my first Felaryan stories said it was an interesting turn that the 'monster' a.k.a. predator won over the supposed main characters.

MrNobody13 wrote:

I've got the money, but I'm kinda afraid my parents'll come to my dorm for a visit and label me a psychopath (cause that's how they roll) for it

Still . . . WANT SO BADLY!!!

Like it's been said: just hide it well in your computer's folders and there, you'll be safe. ;P

I'll probably get them soon, then.

***Unnecessarily detailed, spoiler-filled feedback incoming. If you have not read the 4th manga, read at your own risk.***


Alright, I finally sat down and read the 4th tomb, and I've gotta say I was very impressed. The art, as predicted, was better than ever, especially the shading. I think you've really hit your metaphorical 'stride' with this one. In the previous three, there were at least two or three spots that stuck out in my mind as memorable/awesome/hilarious/etc. But now, I'm having a hard time keeping all the 'crowning moments of awesome' straight there are so many. (And yes, I know you can technically only have one CMoA in any given work. Sue me.)

So I'm gonna just try to go over the highlights here, without typing a whole essay. (spoiler, I fail)

I enjoyed Anna's take-charge attitude, and was a little surprised at Crisis's virtual army of friends and acquaintances, even though not all of them seemed especially good at hunting for a specific human. "You're doing it wrong Aya!" made me laugh, as well. I do however think that maybe the 'Lea hunt' went on for just a tiny bit longer than it needed too, from a pacing perspective.

Second, the 'luckiest human of the day' bit had me snickering out loud, which given the fact I try to avoid snickering when I can, says a lot.

The whole section with Anko, Fiona, Ramtov and Thas was pure awesome. With the banter, the chibi tongue deflections, that magnificently suggestive 'tongue-stripping' bit (Mina would die of jealousy), the very well executed action with all those 'darn crazy holes', and of course that poor fucking shark. The shark was probably the hardest I've laughed at anything you've done so far.

I find I've grow to rather like the interplay between Ramtov and Thas, in that classic Odd Couple way. I'm quite glad they made it out okay. Thas is also more of a powerhouse than I've been giving him credit for: now that I think, as long as he keeps his wits about him, those portals make him about as safe as something his size can be in Felarya. ...especially if he has some giant punches to work with.

Also, while I've said before I don't buy this for the fetish content, I was happy to see a more even distribution between men and women getting vored, in terms of screen time.

And yeah, that cliffhanger was pretty evil. Not that I blame you, or would have done different in your place, but yeah; evil.

Oh, and congratulations on dominating the Lulu E-book section. I demand a wet T-shirt contest between Vivian and FF10's Lulu in a not-completely-off-theme celebration!

PrinnyDood wrote:

I demand a wet T-shirt contest between Vivian and FF10's Lulu in a not-completely-off-theme celebration!

Wait, you want to make Vivian less naked, but then make her slightly more naked, while still being less naked than her natural state?

I just finished reading Tome 4, and it was awesome. Great job Karbo!

Oh, and @Oldman, how 'bout instead of a wet t-shirt contest, we just have a wet contest?

Oldman40k2003 wrote:

Wait, you want to make Vivian less naked, but then make her slightly more naked, while still being less naked than her natural state?

Er, hmmm. Does sound a little strange when you put it that way. Perhaps EdgedWeapon is right, and a simple 'wet contest' would work better, under the circumstances, haha.

Edit: Or, I suppose, we could just feed an OS-tan style personification of the Lulu E-book section to Crisis. (I imagine Lulu E-Book-Section-Tan as a catgirl, for some reason) Maybe that would be a more fitting celebration theme.

...yes, I'm a horrible person.

Glad you liked that tome !

And a wet contest sounds nice XP

I'm sure Anko will love it ^^;

So, I finally got the chance to read this :3 And I enjoyed it! Great to see the various camos of characters, and yay, Aya!

Spoiler:

Anyway, this should mean I'll be a bit more active on the forum since I'm no longer having to frantically avoid spoilers! XD

I'm not sure if a prepaid credit card will work for this kind of thing, but if it does, I'll definitely purchase these so I can stop feeling like I'm out of the loop.

I'm 18 and jobless, so I can't get a regular credit card.

AisuKaiko wrote:

So, I finally got the chance to read this :3 And I enjoyed it! Great to see the various camos of characters, and yay, Aya!

Spoiler:

Anyway, this should mean I'll be a bit more active on the forum since I'm no longer having to frantically avoid spoilers! XD

Ah great ! XD I'm glad you liked it :3

Noonstar : I'm not exactly sure what is a prepaid card but I imagine it can work yes ^^

Hi, I joined this sight only a day ago, the main reason for that is: Will there be a Felarya t5? I have read 1-4 and the story didn't quite end, anyone know anything about this? Under progress, etc?
Hope for answers

Oh you can bet there will be a t5

If I'm not mistaken Karbo's said already that he has plans to work on it. Though he's doing a vore-related manga/comic chapter right now, and he probably wont get back to the Felarya manga for a while. Just sit tight

Yeah, what Bael says seems about right.
This thread could probably be merged with the existing Felarya manga thread though.