The Many Bios of the Man They Call Aisu

Okay, I have a new bio up. What, ya think I made a new character? Haha, no, it's a full bio of Stark!

Please, get out your ice picks, cleavers, and shotguns and rip that fucker apart so I can be sure that in the end, his character will at least be somewhat quality :\

Rewrote part of Ruby's bio and added a few details here and there.

I modified the sizes of Ruby and Olive to reflect the new canon scale. I took the opportunity to scale them down a bit, actually, since everything else is so much bigger. ^^;


Ruby now stands 73 feet high.

Olive now stands 55 feet high.

The thing I can't help but point out here is that there are some key similarities between the personalities of Ruby and Olive. While indeed your editing of Ruby's bio has made it less apparent, from both what you have personally stated in the past and what I can draw from having read over your works, they both seem to have a certain innocence and tendency to be needlessly happy. To be certain they are still different enough to not be interchangeable but it just doesn't seem like either has any notable air of seriousness to them, which in itself doesn't quite flow well with the given context as Felarya without the sexual aspects is pretty much a world of death. Although this complaint could just be due to my personal biases as apposed to any real issue, which is a very real possibility knowing myself.

Moving along though to something else I find perplexing: Your explanation of Olive not being a consumer of humanoids is in part that they're simply too large to fit down her throat. I disagree with that due to her given size. (Reference might not be the best here but lets just look at some things)



Alright, so from this we can see that the largest pictured dinosaur is approximately 13 meters in length. A meter is equivalent to about 3.2 feet to clear that up. Now, it already looks as if the biggest creature pictured could fit the human figure down it's throat with a bit of effort, but to put things into perspective: Olive is 55 feet tall and 128 long, effectively dwarfing everything pictured. It might just be me, but that seems like it'd be around a suitable size for ingesting an average sized humanoid. Anyways, it might seem like this is all an attempt at forcing vore or something but I give my reassurances that it's just expressing my confusion at something I don't think is a very justified explanation. In the case that I'm correct and she is big enough, you could still simply have her not consume people off principle, not every predator ever would resort to that sort of thing I suppose.

So... if I assume Aisu is an average human, yes, theoretically, Olive could swallow him. I'll probably change it, since it really won't matter in the end, but hey, one can never be sure ^^;

I retconned the meeting of Ruby and Aisu, and made it more believable

Alright, I rewrote Olive's bio. I added a lot about her history and such, since it just felt empty. Feel free to pick at it; I'm very eager for feedback so I can iron out the kinks ^^;

I added Lesky o: Also put the bios in Spoilers for the sake of aesthetics

Tarina now has a full bio! Please feel free to tell me your thoughts ^^;

T'is a short one, but I managed to make a bio for Lazuli o3o

Noticed that a few measurements lacked the metric values, so I corrected that. Also, if some folks didn't notice, I updated the artwork for Ruby and Aisu to reflect the recent remakes.

Made a slight edit to Ruby's backstory to make it a tad more plausible.

Editted Ruby's feeding habits and applied Fish's Voral Alignment specs to the preds.