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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Mon Feb 28, 2011 3:19 am | |
| Ops my bad ^_^; thanks for the notice and the correction ! | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:54 pm | |
| I noticed that Succubi on their page are still depicted as 80 ft tall on average. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:14 am | |
| oh right I forgot to update that, thanks ^^ | |
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Nyaha Eternal Optimist
Posts : 3845 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 31 Location : Canada. ^.^ Goooooo Snow!
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:16 pm | |
| On the main page, where it says, under Dangers, "Galfam-Abh MURCOWIH scale (Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans)," Shouldn't that be Multi-Universal Research Center?
Also, there's a grammar error under Dimensional Portals where it reads, "A portal is like a two-way door from on place to another," "on" should be "one". | |
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Jætte_Troll Friend of the Jotun
Posts : 2769 Join date : 2009-02-02 Age : 33 Location : Over There
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:23 pm | |
| - Nyaha wrote:
- On the main page, where it says, under Dangers, "Galfam-Abh MURCOWIH scale (Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans)," Shouldn't that be Multi-Universal Research Center?
Also, there's a grammar error under Dimensional Portals where it reads, "A portal is like a two-way door from on place to another," "on" should be "one". No, Multiverse is a term used to refer to the total collection of parallel dimensions. | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:11 pm | |
| Another check, Angels too haven't been scaled up yet, such as mentioning an 80 ft tall creature. | |
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Oldman40k2003 Moderator
Posts : 661 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:34 pm | |
| - Jætte_Troll wrote:
- Nyaha wrote:
- On the main page, where it says, under Dangers, "Galfam-Abh MURCOWIH scale (Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans)," Shouldn't that be Multi-Universal Research Center?
Also, there's a grammar error under Dimensional Portals where it reads, "A portal is like a two-way door from on place to another," "on" should be "one". No, Multiverse is a term used to refer to the total collection of parallel dimensions. I think Nayaha was pointing out that "Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans" turned into an acynom would be "MRCWIH", not "MURCOWIH". Just changing the capitalization should fix that: MUltiversal Research Center On Worlds Inhabited by Humans. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:03 am | |
| Alright, I made those corrections, thank you for pointing them out ^^ | |
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Nyaha Eternal Optimist
Posts : 3845 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 31 Location : Canada. ^.^ Goooooo Snow!
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:20 pm | |
| - Karbo wrote:
- Alright, I made those corrections, thank you for pointing them out ^^
I feel helpful now. You're welcome! ^.^ | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:30 am | |
| While a ghost can devour a Shamshi from time to time
This was in the Phantom Elf entry. What's a Shamshi? | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:36 am | |
| That's their other name ^^ | |
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Nyaha Eternal Optimist
Posts : 3845 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 31 Location : Canada. ^.^ Goooooo Snow!
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Mar 10, 2011 1:25 pm | |
| On Katrika's wiki page, under "Reshaping Ability," where it says, "Her shape changing ability, which useful, is not instantaneous", I think would flow a litle better grammatically if "which" were changed to, "wihile". Also, It would be greatly appreciated, by me, if I could see a properly-coloured picture of Katrika, rather than the sepia-tone one on the wiki, please and thank you. | |
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French snack Moderator
Posts : 1192 Join date : 2009-04-05 Location : in Milly's stomach. Care to join me?
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:09 pm | |
| - Nyaha wrote:
- On Katrika's wiki page, under "Reshaping Ability," where it says, "Her shape changing ability, which useful, is not instantaneous", I think would flow a litle better grammatically if "which" were changed to, "wihile".
Fixed. | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sun Mar 13, 2011 6:56 am | |
| From the Torpaline coast: deciduous forest.At its mid-point
There is no space between the period and "At".
Also, my user name was spelled wrong in the Pyrale Mountains page. It's Okotami, not otokami. | |
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French snack Moderator
Posts : 1192 Join date : 2009-04-05 Location : in Milly's stomach. Care to join me?
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sun Mar 13, 2011 7:11 am | |
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Jasconius Survivor
Posts : 810 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : Pit of Tartarus
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Wed Mar 16, 2011 12:45 pm | |
| I would like to suggest that Fungoïds and Saurotauran be moved from Fauna to Minor Races on the wiki as both are described as being sapient and even possessing tools and tribes. Saurotaurans could be combined under the Squamataurs. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:43 am | |
| mhhh that's a good suggestion here ^^ - Sean Okotami wrote:
Also, my user name was spelled wrong in the Pyrale Mountains page. It's Okotami, not otokami. Ops my bad | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:24 pm | |
| From Drayla's entry: Drayla is a lazy and sleeps a lot
It should either be "is lazy" or "is a lazy dryad" | |
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Oldman40k2003 Moderator
Posts : 661 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:06 pm | |
| - Sean Okotami wrote:
- From Drayla's entry: Drayla is a lazy and sleeps a lot
It should either be "is lazy" or "is a lazy dryad" But the skipping of words it an indication of just how lazy she is. ... Not going to buy that? Okay, I fixed it. | |
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rcs619 Felarya cartographer
Posts : 1589 Join date : 2008-04-07 Age : 36
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:35 pm | |
| Noticed some stuff about Centaurs that just don't make sense. - Quote :
- centaurs can feel the faintest vibrations of the ground, allowing them to locate prey miles away
This just doesn't make sense. I mean, they have hooves. They just should not be able to do this. They already have the ability to run excessivly fast, and considering their heights, they would have an excellent field of vision on the wide open plains. Their horse-like ears would also give them good hearing too. Doing this for things miles away is just way too much, and if the range got cut down, it wouldn't matter because the centaur would have seen them anyway. Being able to sense vibrations just seems excessive, and would be far more sensible on nagas, since snakes do that. - Quote :
- or simply lean forward, mouth wide open to gobble up victims on the ground, tongue licking the ground behind them, pretty much like how horses might graze in a field.
This just also seems silly. I mean, even if a centaur could lean very far forward, their tongues would need to be very, very long. It may make sense of Giraffe-taurs, but for a horse, it just seems wierd. Its probably best of they just stick to grabbing their prey like everyone else. Maybe they could also use their hooves, and stomp the ground near their prey to knock them off their feet. Just my two cents. Honestly, just looking at the article, Centaurs really need an almost complete overhaul. What's there just seems very dated, and quite a few of their traits just do not fit together. | |
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Karbo Evil admin
Posts : 3812 Join date : 2007-12-08
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 25, 2011 4:22 am | |
| Mhh well centaurs are one of the less developped main species to this day and indeed the entry is rather old. So feel free to create a thread to post suggestions about them. - rcs619 wrote:
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- or simply lean forward, mouth wide open to gobble up victims on the ground, tongue licking the ground behind them, pretty much like how horses might graze in a field.
This just also seems silly. I mean, even if a centaur could lean very far forward, their tongues would need to be very, very long. It may make sense of Giraffe-taurs, but for a horse, it just seems wierd. Its probably best of they just stick to grabbing their prey like everyone else. Maybe they could also use their hooves, and stomp the ground near their prey to knock them off their feet.
I kinda like this idea though. It's pretty unique and it gives them a distinct way of feeding rather than just go and grab. | |
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Jætte_Troll Friend of the Jotun
Posts : 2769 Join date : 2009-02-02 Age : 33 Location : Over There
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:22 am | |
| While it does imitate a horse grazing, the problem here is that grass doesn't move. If a centaur was just eating grass it makes sense, but hunting down people they'd having to be moving... which would look sort of silly... | |
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Shady Knight Lord of the Elements
Posts : 4580 Join date : 2008-01-20 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:28 am | |
| From Negav's university entry: The place is litterally bursting wiht magic everywhere (with is mispelled) | |
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aethernavale Great warrior
Posts : 501 Join date : 2010-03-07
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:40 am | |
| - Sean Okotami wrote:
- From Negav's university entry: The place is litterally bursting wiht magic everywhere (with is mispelled)
So is literally. | |
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AisuKaiko Keeper of Flat Chests
Posts : 2078 Join date : 2009-12-21 Age : 33 Location : In Ruby's cave in the Imoreith Tundra
| Subject: Re: Wiki corrections Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:01 am | |
| On Aurora's page, somewhere in the first paragraph still has her old height listed. ^^; | |
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