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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeMon Feb 28, 2011 3:19 am

Ops my bad ^_^;
thanks for the notice and the correction !
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeThu Mar 03, 2011 4:54 pm

I noticed that Succubi on their page are still depicted as 80 ft tall on average.
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oh right I forgot to update that, thanks ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 04, 2011 12:16 pm

On the main page, where it says, under Dangers, "Galfam-Abh MURCOWIH scale (Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans)," Shouldn't that be Multi-Universal Research Center?

Also, there's a grammar error under Dimensional Portals where it reads, "A portal is like a two-way door from on place to another," "on" should be "one".
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 04, 2011 12:23 pm

Nyaha wrote:
On the main page, where it says, under Dangers, "Galfam-Abh MURCOWIH scale (Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans)," Shouldn't that be Multi-Universal Research Center?

Also, there's a grammar error under Dimensional Portals where it reads, "A portal is like a two-way door from on place to another," "on" should be "one".

No, Multiverse is a term used to refer to the total collection of parallel dimensions.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 04, 2011 3:11 pm

Another check, Angels too haven't been scaled up yet, such as mentioning an 80 ft tall creature.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 04, 2011 6:34 pm

Jætte_Troll wrote:
Nyaha wrote:
On the main page, where it says, under Dangers, "Galfam-Abh MURCOWIH scale (Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans)," Shouldn't that be Multi-Universal Research Center?

Also, there's a grammar error under Dimensional Portals where it reads, "A portal is like a two-way door from on place to another," "on" should be "one".

No, Multiverse is a term used to refer to the total collection of parallel dimensions.

I think Nayaha was pointing out that "Multiversal Research Center on Worlds Inhabited by Humans" turned into an acynom would be "MRCWIH", not "MURCOWIH". Just changing the capitalization should fix that: MUltiversal Research Center On Worlds Inhabited by Humans.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeSat Mar 05, 2011 2:03 am

Alright, I made those corrections, thank you for pointing them out ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeSat Mar 05, 2011 4:20 pm

Karbo wrote:
Alright, I made those corrections, thank you for pointing them out ^^
I feel helpful now. You're welcome! ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeThu Mar 10, 2011 9:30 am

While a ghost can devour a Shamshi from time to time

This was in the Phantom Elf entry. What's a Shamshi?
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeThu Mar 10, 2011 9:36 am

That's their other name ^^
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On Katrika's wiki page, under "Reshaping Ability," where it says, "Her shape changing ability, which useful, is not instantaneous", I think would flow a litle better grammatically if "which" were changed to, "wihile".

Also, It would be greatly appreciated, by me, if I could see a properly-coloured picture of Katrika, rather than the sepia-tone one on the wiki, please and thank you. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeThu Mar 10, 2011 10:09 pm

Nyaha wrote:
On Katrika's wiki page, under "Reshaping Ability," where it says, "Her shape changing ability, which useful, is not instantaneous", I think would flow a litle better grammatically if "which" were changed to, "wihile".

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeSun Mar 13, 2011 6:56 am

From the Torpaline coast: deciduous forest.At its mid-point

There is no space between the period and "At".

Also, my user name was spelled wrong in the Pyrale Mountains page. It's Okotami, not otokami.
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Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeWed Mar 16, 2011 12:45 pm

I would like to suggest that Fungoïds and Saurotauran be moved from Fauna to Minor Races on the wiki as both are described as being sapient and even possessing tools and tribes. Saurotaurans could be combined under the Squamataurs.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeThu Mar 17, 2011 2:43 am

mhhh that's a good suggestion here ^^

Sean Okotami wrote:

Also, my user name was spelled wrong in the Pyrale Mountains page. It's Okotami, not otokami.

Ops my bad
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeSat Mar 19, 2011 2:24 pm

From Drayla's entry: Drayla is a lazy and sleeps a lot

It should either be "is lazy" or "is a lazy dryad"
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeSat Mar 19, 2011 9:06 pm

Sean Okotami wrote:
From Drayla's entry: Drayla is a lazy and sleeps a lot

It should either be "is lazy" or "is a lazy dryad"

But the skipping of words it an indication of just how lazy she is.


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Not going to buy that?

Okay, I fixed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeThu Mar 24, 2011 9:35 pm

Noticed some stuff about Centaurs that just don't make sense.

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centaurs can feel the faintest vibrations of the ground, allowing them to locate prey miles away

This just doesn't make sense. I mean, they have hooves. They just should not be able to do this. They already have the ability to run excessivly fast, and considering their heights, they would have an excellent field of vision on the wide open plains. Their horse-like ears would also give them good hearing too. Doing this for things miles away is just way too much, and if the range got cut down, it wouldn't matter because the centaur would have seen them anyway.

Being able to sense vibrations just seems excessive, and would be far more sensible on nagas, since snakes do that.

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or simply lean forward, mouth wide open to gobble up victims on the ground, tongue licking the ground behind them, pretty much like how horses might graze in a field.

This just also seems silly. I mean, even if a centaur could lean very far forward, their tongues would need to be very, very long. It may make sense of Giraffe-taurs, but for a horse, it just seems wierd. Its probably best of they just stick to grabbing their prey like everyone else. Maybe they could also use their hooves, and stomp the ground near their prey to knock them off their feet.

Just my two cents.

Honestly, just looking at the article, Centaurs really need an almost complete overhaul. What's there just seems very dated, and quite a few of their traits just do not fit together.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 25, 2011 4:22 am

Mhh well centaurs are one of the less developped main species to this day and indeed the entry is rather old.
So feel free to create a thread to post suggestions about them.

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or simply lean forward, mouth wide open to gobble up victims on the ground, tongue licking the ground behind them, pretty much like how horses might graze in a field.

This just also seems silly. I mean, even if a centaur could lean very far forward, their tongues would need to be very, very long. It may make sense of Giraffe-taurs, but for a horse, it just seems wierd. Its probably best of they just stick to grabbing their prey like everyone else. Maybe they could also use their hooves, and stomp the ground near their prey to knock them off their feet.

I kinda like this idea though. It's pretty unique and it gives them a distinct way of feeding rather than just go and grab.
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 25, 2011 8:22 am

While it does imitate a horse grazing, the problem here is that grass doesn't move. If a centaur was just eating grass it makes sense, but hunting down people they'd having to be moving... which would look sort of silly...
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From Negav's university entry: The place is litterally bursting wiht magic everywhere (with is mispelled)
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PostSubject: Re: Wiki corrections   Wiki corrections - Page 5 Icon_minitimeFri Mar 25, 2011 8:40 am

Sean Okotami wrote:
From Negav's university entry: The place is litterally bursting wiht magic everywhere (with is mispelled)

So is literally.
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On Aurora's page, somewhere in the first paragraph still has her old height listed. ^^;
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