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Reiko Roaming thug
Posts : 117 Join date : 2007-12-29 Location : Chidokai Forest
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Thu Jan 03, 2008 5:27 pm | |
| - Karbo wrote:
- Reiko wrote:
- and Im trying to decide what I shall do next with the story. ^^
Mhh I think sooner or later you will need to adress the Cynthia issue ^_^
If freed one way or another, would the naga be vengeful toward Reiko and try to eat her again ? or would she decide she is a fun company after all and become a loyal friend ? And if so which event would lead her to this decision ( she don't seem to find it fun right now XD ) ? etc lol your filling my head with more questions I need to answer! *wiggles* Get out of my head!! He's eating my brain!///Okay to much craziness from me xD | |
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gwadahunter2222 Master cartographer
Posts : 1842 Join date : 2007-12-08 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Thu Jan 03, 2008 6:50 pm | |
| Great chapter I hope Reiko will be good in math when she will have the stone | |
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Raetsu Lord Pichu Marauder of the deep jungle
Posts : 326 Join date : 2007-12-10 Age : 35 Location : Netherworld of the Usagiyasha
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:19 pm | |
| Excellent chapter(s) here dood! I await what happens when Reiko gets her hands er-paws on that stone *insert Neko's in a frenzied panic* | |
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Spykeofkonoha valiant swordman
Posts : 181 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:52 pm | |
| - Reiko wrote:
- Okay to much craziness from me xD
Not enough for me! *runs around drooling at the mouth* | |
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Reiko Roaming thug
Posts : 117 Join date : 2007-12-29 Location : Chidokai Forest
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Thu Jan 03, 2008 10:46 pm | |
| - gwadahunter2222 wrote:
- Great chapter
I hope Reiko will be good in math when she will have the stone <Reiko> What are you talking about?! I know math...1+1=1 and 5+3=15...Wait a minute...5+3=1...Ha! Outsmarted your ass ^__^ <Talia (Aka me...Not a dood xD)> Reiko your hopeless. <Reiko glares> Your lucky I wont eat you~ | |
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lami Veteran knight
Posts : 310 Join date : 2007-12-11
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:31 am | |
| haha I wonder if Aki should be some sort of antagonist in this story I could imagine her not wanting to let a preditor get ahold of such a dangerous magical item | |
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gwadahunter2222 Master cartographer
Posts : 1842 Join date : 2007-12-08 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Fri Jan 04, 2008 5:39 am | |
| - Reiko wrote:
- <Reiko> What are you talking about?! I know math...1+1=1 and 5+3=15...Wait a minute...5+3=1...Ha! Outsmarted your ass ^__^
<Talia (Aka me...Not a dood xD)> Reiko your hopeless.
<Reiko glares> Your lucky I wont eat you~ When she will find it I will do a prayer for not find a 600ft dog-girl | |
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Pendragon Grand Mecha Enthusiast
Posts : 3229 Join date : 2007-12-09
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Fri Jan 04, 2008 6:16 am | |
| I'd relax on that wish. Why would she want that?
Last I remember, 600 foot girls do not get full. They don't even get good food. It's all too small.
I do expect something very bad to happen, though. | |
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Reiko Roaming thug
Posts : 117 Join date : 2007-12-29 Location : Chidokai Forest
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Fri Jan 04, 2008 11:35 am | |
| - lami wrote:
- haha I wonder if Aki should be some sort of antagonist in this story I could imagine her not wanting to let a preditor get ahold of such a dangerous magical item
Oh? Well Id be interested in putting her in ^^ | |
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gwadahunter2222 Master cartographer
Posts : 1842 Join date : 2007-12-08 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:20 pm | |
| - Pendragon wrote:
- I'd relax on that wish. Why would she want that?
Last I remember, 600 foot girls do not get full. They don't even get good food. It's all too small.
I do expect something very bad to happen, though. So she will eat everyone in Felarya including naga if it happens | |
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Pendragon Grand Mecha Enthusiast
Posts : 3229 Join date : 2007-12-09
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:42 pm | |
| She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.
Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.
Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...
*looks around*
I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak. | |
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gwadahunter2222 Master cartographer
Posts : 1842 Join date : 2007-12-08 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:53 pm | |
| - Pendragon wrote:
- She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.
Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.
Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...
*looks around*
I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak. I know, I was just kidding about the fact she is not good in math and it may be dangerous | |
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lami Veteran knight
Posts : 310 Join date : 2007-12-11
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:01 am | |
| - Pendragon wrote:
- She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.
Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.
Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...
*looks around*
I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak. I dont think the stone is a wishing stone guys. it just makes you big | |
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Malahite Cog in the Machine
Posts : 2433 Join date : 2007-12-11 Location : Old World
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 12:08 pm | |
| 600ft Pred's get full.
They just eat Mech's and get large doses of Iron with their meal.
Like the way you write, anyways. Seemed a bit of a porn-fic mix in the beginning more than just a fic, though it's still a fine piece of work. | |
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Pendragon Grand Mecha Enthusiast
Posts : 3229 Join date : 2007-12-09
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 12:44 pm | |
| A mech is a jelly bean compared to a 600 Foot girl. She ain't getting much iron from that. Also, I'm a bit worried about her growing so tall, since bone matter expands at a slower rate than skin and organs. (read it in a science magazine once) All I can say is that she'll need alot of calcium to stay intact.
Lami: Thanks for clearing that up. I was a bit confused from that. | |
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Reiko Roaming thug
Posts : 117 Join date : 2007-12-29 Location : Chidokai Forest
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 1:56 pm | |
| - lami wrote:
- Pendragon wrote:
- She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.
Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.
Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...
*looks around*
I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak. I dont think the stone is a wishing stone guys. it just makes you big Yeah just magical that makes ya big xD And she's actually only going to be 60 ft tall the joke was she sucks at math and thought she would be 600 xD | |
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gwadahunter2222 Master cartographer
Posts : 1842 Join date : 2007-12-08 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 2:50 pm | |
| A question when she will be giant, will she be able to swallow a whole naga
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Pendragon Grand Mecha Enthusiast
Posts : 3229 Join date : 2007-12-09
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:36 pm | |
| I'm assuming yes gwadahunter, since she can swallow someone her size as a normal size. | |
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Reiko Roaming thug
Posts : 117 Join date : 2007-12-29 Location : Chidokai Forest
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 5:35 pm | |
| Hehe thats what im hoping to do ^^
*Cynthia eeps and hides*
I wonder how Criss would taste! *Reiko grins* | |
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lami Veteran knight
Posts : 310 Join date : 2007-12-11
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 5:46 pm | |
| - Reiko wrote:
- Hehe thats what im hoping to do ^^
*Cynthia eeps and hides*
I wonder how Criss would taste! *Reiko grins* probably very sweet, since she is earth based. but crisis is much larger than someone 60 feet, and while Reiko could eat someone 60 feet, Crisis is 120 feet canonically and thats not her full length. regardless, It seems almost sad that Reiko will soon be big like everything else predator in felarya, I found it refreshing that someone here was a human sized pred. Aki: at least with a human sized predator i don't have to stoop to dirty tricks to get away. | |
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Spykeofkonoha valiant swordman
Posts : 181 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:26 pm | |
| - lami wrote:
- probably very sweet, since she is earth based. but crisis is much larger than someone 60 feet, and while Reiko could eat someone 60 feet, Crisis is 120 feet canonically and thats not her full length.
Uh... does that include length as well? I always thought she had an equally long tail to balance out her height... though, that's just the thinkings of a rambling student of the body, I'm not a zoologist... I always figured that she was 60ft tall standing up while she was 120ft in total length from the tip of her tail to the top of her head. But again, I digress... I really wouldn't mind "seeing" this consumption when Reiko becomes a giant *drools at the idea*... | |
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Reiko Roaming thug
Posts : 117 Join date : 2007-12-29 Location : Chidokai Forest
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:20 pm | |
| Well I never said the quest will be a success, or will it? =3
lol I'm sorry I haven't been working on the story as recently though, RL sucks thanks to going back to work T__T | |
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The Rev Hero
Posts : 1005 Join date : 2007-12-10 Location : Eugene's Trick Bag
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Tue Jan 08, 2008 6:44 pm | |
| I read the first two so far, the second one is pretty great. Especially the ending. | |
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lami Veteran knight
Posts : 310 Join date : 2007-12-11
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Tue Jan 08, 2008 10:25 pm | |
| I miss remembered must be another naga, chrisis is 75 feet from head to ground, but as you can imagine, this isnt to helpful since she as a snake can have varying levels of hieght from ground level. | |
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Spykeofkonoha valiant swordman
Posts : 181 Join date : 2007-12-09 Age : 40
| Subject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) Wed Jan 09, 2008 9:26 am | |
| - lami wrote:
- I miss remembered must be another naga, chrisis is 75 feet from head to ground, but as you can imagine, this isnt to helpful since she as a snake can have varying levels of hieght from ground level.
This is true, but discussions like that I think should be left into the idea discussion board. | |
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