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PostSubject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!)   Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) - Page 4 Icon_minitimeThu Jan 03, 2008 5:27 pm

Karbo wrote:
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and Im trying to decide what I shall do next with the story. ^^

Mhh I think sooner or later you will need to adress the Cynthia issue ^_^

If freed one way or another, would the naga be vengeful toward Reiko and try to eat her again ?
or would she decide she is a fun company after all and become a loyal friend ? And if so which event would lead her to this decision ( she don't seem to find it fun right now XD ) ? etc Razz

lol your filling my head with more questions I need to answer! *wiggles* Get out of my head!! He's eating my brain!///Okay to much craziness from me xD
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Great chapter cheers
I hope Reiko will be good in math when she will have the stone Laughing
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Excellent chapter(s) here dood! I await what happens when Reiko gets her hands er-paws on that stone *insert Neko's in a frenzied panic*
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Okay to much craziness from me xD

Not enough for me! *runs around drooling at the mouth*
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gwadahunter2222 wrote:
Great chapter cheers
I hope Reiko will be good in math when she will have the stone Laughing

<Reiko> What are you talking about?! I know math...1+1=1 and 5+3=15...Wait a minute...5+3=1...Ha! Outsmarted your ass ^__^

<Talia (Aka me...Not a dood xD)> Reiko your hopeless.

<Reiko glares> Your lucky I wont eat you~
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haha I wonder if Aki should be some sort of antagonist in this story Razz I could imagine her not wanting to let a preditor get ahold of such a dangerous magical item
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<Reiko> What are you talking about?! I know math...1+1=1 and 5+3=15...Wait a minute...5+3=1...Ha! Outsmarted your ass ^__^

<Talia (Aka me...Not a dood xD)> Reiko your hopeless.

<Reiko glares> Your lucky I wont eat you~
When she will find it I will do a prayer for not find a 600ft dog-girl Laughing
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I'd relax on that wish. Why would she want that?

Last I remember, 600 foot girls do not get full. They don't even get good food. It's all too small.

I do expect something very bad to happen, though.
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lami wrote:
haha I wonder if Aki should be some sort of antagonist in this story Razz I could imagine her not wanting to let a preditor get ahold of such a dangerous magical item

Oh? Well Id be interested in putting her in ^^
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I'd relax on that wish. Why would she want that?

Last I remember, 600 foot girls do not get full. They don't even get good food. It's all too small.

I do expect something very bad to happen, though.
So she will eat everyone in Felarya including naga if it happens Very Happy
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She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.

Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.

Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...

*looks around*

I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak.
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Pendragon wrote:
She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.

Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.

Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...

*looks around*

I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak.
I know, I was just kidding about the fact she is not good in math and it may be dangerous Laughing
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Pendragon wrote:
She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.

Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.

Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...

*looks around*

I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak.
I dont think the stone is a wishing stone guys. it just makes you big
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PostSubject: Re: Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!)   Reiko in Felarya (FINALLY CHAPTER TEN!!!!) - Page 4 Icon_minitimeMon Jan 07, 2008 12:08 pm

600ft Pred's get full.

They just eat Mech's and get large doses of Iron with their meal.

Like the way you write, anyways. Seemed a bit of a porn-fic mix in the beginning more than just a fic, though it's still a fine piece of work.
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A mech is a jelly bean compared to a 600 Foot girl. She ain't getting much iron from that. Also, I'm a bit worried about her growing so tall, since bone matter expands at a slower rate than skin and organs. (read it in a science magazine once) All I can say is that she'll need alot of calcium to stay intact.

Lami: Thanks for clearing that up. I was a bit confused from that.
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lami wrote:
Pendragon wrote:
She could simply wish to have her meals tied up and/or bound.

Easier to catch, yet still they squirm going down.

Than again, we'll just have to wait and see...

*looks around*

I bet this is giving Reiko an appetite even as we speak.
I dont think the stone is a wishing stone guys. it just makes you big

Yeah just magical that makes ya big xD

And she's actually only going to be 60 ft tall the joke was she sucks at math and thought she would be 600 xD
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A question when she will be giant, will she be able to swallow a whole naga Question


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I'm assuming yes gwadahunter, since she can swallow someone her size as a normal size.
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Hehe thats what im hoping to do ^^

*Cynthia eeps and hides*

I wonder how Criss would taste! *Reiko grins*
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Hehe thats what im hoping to do ^^

*Cynthia eeps and hides*

I wonder how Criss would taste! *Reiko grins*
probably very sweet, since she is earth based. but crisis is much larger than someone 60 feet, and while Reiko could eat someone 60 feet, Crisis is 120 feet canonically and thats not her full length.

regardless, It seems almost sad that Reiko will soon be big like everything else predator in felarya, I found it refreshing that someone here was a human sized pred.

Aki: at least with a human sized predator i don't have to stoop to dirty tricks to get away.
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lami wrote:
probably very sweet, since she is earth based. but crisis is much larger than someone 60 feet, and while Reiko could eat someone 60 feet, Crisis is 120 feet canonically and thats not her full length.

Uh... does that include length as well? I always thought she had an equally long tail to balance out her height... though, that's just the thinkings of a rambling student of the body, I'm not a zoologist...

I always figured that she was 60ft tall standing up while she was 120ft in total length from the tip of her tail to the top of her head.

But again, I digress...

I really wouldn't mind "seeing" this consumption when Reiko becomes a giant *drools at the idea*...
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Well I never said the quest will be a success, or will it? =3

lol I'm sorry I haven't been working on the story as recently though, RL sucks thanks to going back to work T__T
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I read the first two so far, the second one is pretty great. Especially the ending.
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I miss remembered must be another naga, chrisis is 75 feet from head to ground, but as you can imagine, this isnt to helpful since she as a snake can have varying levels of hieght from ground level.
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lami wrote:
I miss remembered must be another naga, chrisis is 75 feet from head to ground, but as you can imagine, this isnt to helpful since she as a snake can have varying levels of hieght from ground level.

This is true, but discussions like that I think should be left into the idea discussion board.
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